The hour is late as I discover this gem, the filth of these harem lovers covers this piece of art and I, for one, shall not stand for this. Rally under me those who want a good novel without a dubious MC stringing females along for his own enjoyment, those of you who fight for a novel that’s not stained with the filthy merrymaking that ruins these great novels. There may come a day when every novel has a harem with no storyline to be seen, BUT IT IS NOT THIS DAY. There may be a day when you open a novel and you see a list of potential harems that author will let these filth choose between, BUT IT IS NOT THIS DAYY. Today we fight!! Let’s send these disgustin b*stards back into the abyss they crawled out of.

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Harém: Daenerys Targaryen, Sansa Stark, Margaery Tyrell, Arianne Martell, Myrcella Baratheon....... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

The story goes nowhere. When your MC is a reality bending phoenix with no limits to power, the story gets stale within a couple of chapters. Whats the point of any of his plans and actions when he can just will anything into existence?

It started somewhat good, with good plot and hopes for character development but then it goes to the classic harem WN that you can expect on this site. Writing Quality - 3= Good, it could improve with time. Stability of Updates - 5= Nice updates in my opinion, taking into consideration the length of the chapters. Story Development - 3= Not that great after the harem starts kicking in, as I said, I think this is not good. Character Design - 2= Somewhat 2 dimensional character that confuses me, cannot relate with the MC and the characterization is somewhat basic, coupled with the harem behavior makes this MC subpar in my honest opinion. World Background - 2= The expansion made into an already made world is not that great to guarantee more than 2 stars. Harem novel will always fail to gather the attention of more attentive readers. In all honesty my review serves no purpose if you are writing just for you, or because it is fun. But if you want to write something good and competitive in the market and grow as a writer, then the common harem route is not the way... At least I think so. Have a good day.

Not much depth to the characters. At No time at least so far do you feel anything for the characters. Very bland, oc is op from the start and doesn’t really have any Challenges or emotionel depth. It just is. The story is not very deep it just skins over the details of the world.

I like the premise of the story and the introduction of the MC, though his background and motivations got lost after he inherited the memories. I'm having a hard time seeing where this can go. It's the problem with an immortal all-powerful entity there's no suspense, only curiosity regarding how will the story will unfold. I'll continue reading because I am curious, I'm just apprehensive because so many of these op mc stories are terrible or dropped. Maybe this will be different, still too early.

I had just finished reading this novel from start to finish and I found it to be a truly interesting read very enjoyable from start to finish and that ending truly had me tearing up. Many who have read up to a certain extent or even finish the book may say stuff about the romance and s*x scenes but the story has plenty of actual story on top of that. All in all it was a great read and I highly recommend for people to give it a read.

Nice. interesting concept. never read an immortal in got fanfic. excited for it though. Nice. interesting concept. never read an immortal in got fanfic. excited for it though.