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Tyicius
TyiciusLv142yr
2022-05-06 04:24

I like the premise of the story and the introduction of the MC, though his background and motivations got lost after he inherited the memories. I'm having a hard time seeing where this can go. It's the problem with an immortal all-powerful entity there's no suspense, only curiosity regarding how will the story will unfold. I'll continue reading because I am curious, I'm just apprehensive because so many of these op mc stories are terrible or dropped. Maybe this will be different, still too early.

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GodOfFreedom
GodOfFreedomAuthor

True, there is little suspense. But I kinda enjoy writing it, as I am curious myself where this is going. It's also more about him relearning to live and enjoy his life even as a god, because his power and the memories he has make it easy for him to lose sight of earthly matters. It's more of a personal journey, where he has to learn that even with such great power, not all things will unfold according to his will.

iLoveHarem_S2
iLoveHarem_S2Lv2

Add Daenerys Targaryen, Sansa Stark, Margaery Tyrell, Myrcella Baratheon, Arianne Martell to the harem pls

GodOfFreedom:True, there is little suspense. But I kinda enjoy writing it, as I am curious myself where this is going. It's also more about him relearning to live and enjoy his life even as a god, because his power and the memories he has make it easy for him to lose sight of earthly matters. It's more of a personal journey, where he has to learn that even with such great power, not all things will unfold according to his will.
GodOfFreedom
GodOfFreedomAuthor

... no. I will not 'add' any girl to a 'harem' like some pokemon that can just be caught. There is a reason I only use the word multi-pairing, as I hate 'harems'.

iLoveHarem_S2:Add Daenerys Targaryen, Sansa Stark, Margaery Tyrell, Myrcella Baratheon, Arianne Martell to the harem pls
lord_of_all_realm_
lord_of_all_realm_Lv5

What's the difference?? I'm just curious ☺️

GodOfFreedom:... no. I will not 'add' any girl to a 'harem' like some pokemon that can just be caught. There is a reason I only use the word multi-pairing, as I hate 'harems'.
Isseisenpai
IsseisenpaiLv4

Your main character has a power that is almost omnipotent, having a harem seems essential to me, I mean eternity with a single companion? and your logic is not consistent from the moment you have at least 3 women, it's a harem point.

GodOfFreedom:... no. I will not 'add' any girl to a 'harem' like some pokemon that can just be caught. There is a reason I only use the word multi-pairing, as I hate 'harems'.
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

Do you yourself have a harem or are you just staring at a screen wishing you could have something unreachable for yourself? Another question is why is it essential? Is there a reason you have to have a harem, like what exactly do you find good about having to deal with multiple opinions, multiple differences, and multiple different feelings? What exactly do you like about having extra stress on your mind trying to deal with 5 people, having to know everything about them, and constantly dealing with fueds that spark since you decided to tell your first girlfriend that she isn't good enough, and then tell the next that she isn't enough to make you happy? I'm just trying to get your opinion here, what exactly is good about the constant stress and having to juggle so many things about each of them so they don't leave you since you're a selfish *Explitive* who thinks that everything they did for him wasn't enough? Is it better than having 1 girl, being able to know everything about them while still having time to spend with them? is it better than just having 1 girl that doesn't stress you, knows that she's the best, and is overall happy to spend eternity with you? If your response to my questions is that you can remove their immortality, that'd just make them not like you even more...

Isseisenpai:Your main character has a power that is almost omnipotent, having a harem seems essential to me, I mean eternity with a single companion? and your logic is not consistent from the moment you have at least 3 women, it's a harem point.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

There’s not one. Just the author filling his pride. He’s the type to say “She’s not an object 🤓” if some guy said that he could have a girl. Definitely goes to gay parades weekly.

lord_of_all_realm_:What's the difference?? I'm just curious ☺️
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Although I agree with you that it WOULD be better to have one girl, there’s also the fact that he’s a god. Do you think there’s a human girl worthy of a god? I don’t. Even Zeus didn’t think other gods were enough.

UndeadBeing:Do you yourself have a harem or are you just staring at a screen wishing you could have something unreachable for yourself? Another question is why is it essential? Is there a reason you have to have a harem, like what exactly do you find good about having to deal with multiple opinions, multiple differences, and multiple different feelings? What exactly do you like about having extra stress on your mind trying to deal with 5 people, having to know everything about them, and constantly dealing with fueds that spark since you decided to tell your first girlfriend that she isn't good enough, and then tell the next that she isn't enough to make you happy? I'm just trying to get your opinion here, what exactly is good about the constant stress and having to juggle so many things about each of them so they don't leave you since you're a selfish *Explitive* who thinks that everything they did for him wasn't enough? Is it better than having 1 girl, being able to know everything about them while still having time to spend with them? is it better than just having 1 girl that doesn't stress you, knows that she's the best, and is overall happy to spend eternity with you? If your response to my questions is that you can remove their immortality, that'd just make them not like you even more...
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

Nothing of your sentence gives a reason why harem is better. Zeus had 1 wife, he messed around with everyone else but he still held up having 1 wife because harem just leads to bs. His wife already hates that he goes around and sleeps with whatever moves, why would he get more wives to hate him even more? 1 girl IS better, Even zeus new 1 wife is better. If the god himself who sleeps with anything that can move doesn't try to get a harem, your point is trash. None of the other Gods even tried a harem, yet a lot of them slept with basically anything, look at fenrir, loki slept with some kind of animal to create the being that'd kill odin, another god slept with a horse and made a centaur, Zeus regularly goes out and sleeps with women by disguising himself as animals. Zeus literally sleeps with animals but knows harem is crossing the line, your point of "Being a higher being means you need a harem" is about as dumb as it can get, The only type of gods that have a harem are ones from probably india or egypt, Egypt is a strong doubtfully. Norse and Greek both don't bring a harem, biblical doesn't support harem, Alot of the Gods from egypt don't even try to get 1 wife. Odin himself has 1 in mcu and mythology, Zeus marries one wife, and goes around doing other women usually once each, Christianity's God has never dated anyone, Jesus was literally born without Mary having slept with anyone to create him. It's almost religious how all of the greek gods only have 1 wife and multiple children, some of them don't have children or don't have wives and children. The sheer fact that you say a god should have one wife is outnumbered by how many gods in mythology only have one. Harem is literally nowhere to be found in most of mythology, wanna know why? Because it's a terrible concept. Your whole arguement is based off of the power they possess yet you don't even factor in how happy other gods are with just 1. Before you go into talking about anime gods, most of them don't have more than one, It's literally only the mc's that have harems and even then it's very rare for them to get one without the help of plot to push the feelings when the mc is clearly too stupid to date even one female. Webnovel is the only place that has more harem than nonharem, and most of them don't even show the harem for 99% of the time, the 1% of time it's used is when the mc acts cringe and shows why the plot armor is literally carrying the relationship. Most manga don't have harem because normal people know how hard a relationship is, Most anime focus on actual plot rather than the bs webnovel and harem brings, Most mythology has 1 wife rather than thousands. None of your statements have anything to do with real life. You're so focused on the bs webnovel writers put out that you can't even tell none of what you says has any basis in anything other than the webnovels that do it for the idiots who mistakingly believe power = harem. Most anime either focus on the harem part and ruin the overall plot, or they just sprinkle it in as the side characters being a tad bit more than just teammates. Face it, God's don't need harems. Your whole point is power = harem, you don't even have anything other than webnovel to back up your sorry excuse for a point.

Kw0z:Although I agree with you that it WOULD be better to have one girl, there’s also the fact that he’s a god. Do you think there’s a human girl worthy of a god? I don’t. Even Zeus didn’t think other gods were enough.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

I don’t have time to read all of that.

UndeadBeing:Nothing of your sentence gives a reason why harem is better. Zeus had 1 wife, he messed around with everyone else but he still held up having 1 wife because harem just leads to bs. His wife already hates that he goes around and sleeps with whatever moves, why would he get more wives to hate him even more? 1 girl IS better, Even zeus new 1 wife is better. If the god himself who sleeps with anything that can move doesn't try to get a harem, your point is trash. None of the other Gods even tried a harem, yet a lot of them slept with basically anything, look at fenrir, loki slept with some kind of animal to create the being that'd kill odin, another god slept with a horse and made a centaur, Zeus regularly goes out and sleeps with women by disguising himself as animals. Zeus literally sleeps with animals but knows harem is crossing the line, your point of "Being a higher being means you need a harem" is about as dumb as it can get, The only type of gods that have a harem are ones from probably india or egypt, Egypt is a strong doubtfully. Norse and Greek both don't bring a harem, biblical doesn't support harem, Alot of the Gods from egypt don't even try to get 1 wife. Odin himself has 1 in mcu and mythology, Zeus marries one wife, and goes around doing other women usually once each, Christianity's God has never dated anyone, Jesus was literally born without Mary having slept with anyone to create him. It's almost religious how all of the greek gods only have 1 wife and multiple children, some of them don't have children or don't have wives and children. The sheer fact that you say a god should have one wife is outnumbered by how many gods in mythology only have one. Harem is literally nowhere to be found in most of mythology, wanna know why? Because it's a terrible concept. Your whole arguement is based off of the power they possess yet you don't even factor in how happy other gods are with just 1. Before you go into talking about anime gods, most of them don't have more than one, It's literally only the mc's that have harems and even then it's very rare for them to get one without the help of plot to push the feelings when the mc is clearly too stupid to date even one female. Webnovel is the only place that has more harem than nonharem, and most of them don't even show the harem for 99% of the time, the 1% of time it's used is when the mc acts cringe and shows why the plot armor is literally carrying the relationship. Most manga don't have harem because normal people know how hard a relationship is, Most anime focus on actual plot rather than the bs webnovel and harem brings, Most mythology has 1 wife rather than thousands. None of your statements have anything to do with real life. You're so focused on the bs webnovel writers put out that you can't even tell none of what you says has any basis in anything other than the webnovels that do it for the idiots who mistakingly believe power = harem. Most anime either focus on the harem part and ruin the overall plot, or they just sprinkle it in as the side characters being a tad bit more than just teammates. Face it, God's don't need harems. Your whole point is power = harem, you don't even have anything other than webnovel to back up your sorry excuse for a point.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Also, I never said harem is better. I said a god is better than a human, so it would be normal for them to have multiple wives.

UndeadBeing:Nothing of your sentence gives a reason why harem is better. Zeus had 1 wife, he messed around with everyone else but he still held up having 1 wife because harem just leads to bs. His wife already hates that he goes around and sleeps with whatever moves, why would he get more wives to hate him even more? 1 girl IS better, Even zeus new 1 wife is better. If the god himself who sleeps with anything that can move doesn't try to get a harem, your point is trash. None of the other Gods even tried a harem, yet a lot of them slept with basically anything, look at fenrir, loki slept with some kind of animal to create the being that'd kill odin, another god slept with a horse and made a centaur, Zeus regularly goes out and sleeps with women by disguising himself as animals. Zeus literally sleeps with animals but knows harem is crossing the line, your point of "Being a higher being means you need a harem" is about as dumb as it can get, The only type of gods that have a harem are ones from probably india or egypt, Egypt is a strong doubtfully. Norse and Greek both don't bring a harem, biblical doesn't support harem, Alot of the Gods from egypt don't even try to get 1 wife. Odin himself has 1 in mcu and mythology, Zeus marries one wife, and goes around doing other women usually once each, Christianity's God has never dated anyone, Jesus was literally born without Mary having slept with anyone to create him. It's almost religious how all of the greek gods only have 1 wife and multiple children, some of them don't have children or don't have wives and children. The sheer fact that you say a god should have one wife is outnumbered by how many gods in mythology only have one. Harem is literally nowhere to be found in most of mythology, wanna know why? Because it's a terrible concept. Your whole arguement is based off of the power they possess yet you don't even factor in how happy other gods are with just 1. Before you go into talking about anime gods, most of them don't have more than one, It's literally only the mc's that have harems and even then it's very rare for them to get one without the help of plot to push the feelings when the mc is clearly too stupid to date even one female. Webnovel is the only place that has more harem than nonharem, and most of them don't even show the harem for 99% of the time, the 1% of time it's used is when the mc acts cringe and shows why the plot armor is literally carrying the relationship. Most manga don't have harem because normal people know how hard a relationship is, Most anime focus on actual plot rather than the bs webnovel and harem brings, Most mythology has 1 wife rather than thousands. None of your statements have anything to do with real life. You're so focused on the bs webnovel writers put out that you can't even tell none of what you says has any basis in anything other than the webnovels that do it for the idiots who mistakingly believe power = harem. Most anime either focus on the harem part and ruin the overall plot, or they just sprinkle it in as the side characters being a tad bit more than just teammates. Face it, God's don't need harems. Your whole point is power = harem, you don't even have anything other than webnovel to back up your sorry excuse for a point.
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

No. It's not, more often they only have 1. Nothing about him being strong means he needs more than one.

Kw0z:Also, I never said harem is better. I said a god is better than a human, so it would be normal for them to have multiple wives.
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

Really... tl;dr, none of the gods in mythology, anime, manga, and christianity have harems. Zeus himself only has one wife and the many people he sleeps with and leaves. Just read the stuff i wrote.

Kw0z:I don’t have time to read all of that.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

A god is beyond human understanding. Idiot.

UndeadBeing:No. It's not, more often they only have 1. Nothing about him being strong means he needs more than one.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Many gods had multiple lovers.

UndeadBeing:Really... tl;dr, none of the gods in mythology, anime, manga, and christianity have harems. Zeus himself only has one wife and the many people he sleeps with and leaves. Just read the stuff i wrote.
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

How can you call me dumb when you just stated humans(YOU) can't understand gods. I don't even need to take your other bs claims seriously... You just denied your claim, called me an idiot, and try to argue gods need harems... If you're gonna try to remove the comment I replied to, don't bother I've clipped it. Forever in history you'll be a part of the group who'll blatantly deny their claim while using said denial to argue said claim XD

Kw0z:A god is beyond human understanding. Idiot.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

I am a god. My thoughts are too complex for you.

UndeadBeing:How can you call me dumb when you just stated humans(YOU) can't understand gods. I don't even need to take your other bs claims seriously... You just denied your claim, called me an idiot, and try to argue gods need harems... If you're gonna try to remove the comment I replied to, don't bother I've clipped it. Forever in history you'll be a part of the group who'll blatantly deny their claim while using said denial to argue said claim XD
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Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

And I’ve never deleted a comment in my Webnovel history unless I make a grammar mistake and want to rewrite it.

UndeadBeing:How can you call me dumb when you just stated humans(YOU) can't understand gods. I don't even need to take your other bs claims seriously... You just denied your claim, called me an idiot, and try to argue gods need harems... If you're gonna try to remove the comment I replied to, don't bother I've clipped it. Forever in history you'll be a part of the group who'll blatantly deny their claim while using said denial to argue said claim XD
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kunichan
kunichanLv4

wow It is so rare to see a fellow man of culture here 😭 with just this comment I will definitely read the story.

GodOfFreedom:... no. I will not 'add' any girl to a 'harem' like some pokemon that can just be caught. There is a reason I only use the word multi-pairing, as I hate 'harems'.
Krails710
Krails710Lv4

Many emperors and kings had harems like alexandre le grand and gengis khan and for the reason it is either for alliances or just because they can have whatever they want.One of the reason the marriage was created is to stop dispersing power. it's just a matter of desire and power in the end.

UndeadBeing:Really... tl;dr, none of the gods in mythology, anime, manga, and christianity have harems. Zeus himself only has one wife and the many people he sleeps with and leaves. Just read the stuff i wrote.
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