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SighingClouds
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2022-05-20 08:17

Yo! The cultured beggar is here to give appraisal~ Of course, this is only after reading the first 8 chapters(currently available chaps). Writing Quality: Superb! Aside from little to no errors, everything was good – from its flow to grammars. Particularly chapter 5? or 6? I appreciate the use of the almost perfect Motivation Reaction Units. Story Development: Intriguing! It leaves you interested on what will happen next. As long as you read the first 3 chapters, it's easy to get engrossed in reading the succeeding chapters. Character Design: Multidimensional, I must say. The dilemma, the conflict, the emotional disarray, everything was weaved at 88% to my liking! Particularly, the FL, she's like a real person; which I appreciate the most. Updating Stability: No worries! I'm a cultured beggar. I live through begging... more chapies. If the author doesn't update, I'll use my secret technique on her! World Background: Interesting! Although not the author's focus; and he/she just described it vivid enough, it was still enough to let me enter the book's world. If the author can add 10% details, the work will certainly be upgraded by a tier! Overall: This beggar has changed and was now stingy at his praises. I created a 'to read or not scale', 1 being don't read, and 10 being the most recommended. According to my overall judgement, this book scored 8/10. 8 = Great potential, and worth reading! Sincerely, Cultured Beggar

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DarkElven6
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What is this secret technique? PS would be a good way to get more chapter. Or maybe a gift? Thanks for the review!

SighingClouds
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HAHAHAHA, how does acting cute sounds? hehehe

DarkElven6:What is this secret technique? PS would be a good way to get more chapter. Or maybe a gift? Thanks for the review!
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