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_Nightin_gale_
_Nightin_gale_Lv22yr
2022-07-22 23:59

This is a book I'd give ten stars if I could, from the writing quality, immaculate grammar, storyline, MC, and pacing as well, everything seems just right. Perfect to be fair. Just the synopsis alone is catchy enough to hook the readers, let alone the book of which I instantly read up to 32 chapters already. As many fast passes I have would be spent here definitely.

Valerian, The Legendary

THE_WORDSMITH
4.8
409 Chs

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EsZeus
EsZeusLv15

Grammar is bad. Don't lie, please. If you write a review, at least write it honestly :) Missing words, wrong sentences, and sometimes strange sentence structures. Overall 10/5 stars, yes. If not for the grammar

2yr
_Nightin_gale_
_Nightin_gale_Lv2

Genuinely curious if you know something about grammar... I'm clearly not stupid to spend fast passes only to lie in my review. Reported.

EsZeus:Grammar is bad. Don't lie, please. If you write a review, at least write it honestly :) Missing words, wrong sentences, and sometimes strange sentence structures. Overall 10/5 stars, yes. If not for the grammar
2yr
EsZeus
EsZeusLv15

what a reason to report xD I didn't harass you nor did I behaved wrong. This clearly proved me only, that you indeed kinda don't know a thing about grammar. You didn't lie. You are just not familiar with the english language it seems xD thanks, made my day haha

2yr
EsZeus
EsZeusLv15

btw. using fast passes as an argument haha I paid, and now what? ^^ Report yourself maybe ☺️

2yr
_Nightin_gale_
_Nightin_gale_Lv2

I honestly don't understand why you're being negative under someone else's story, under someone else's review. No one's interested in arguing here, I'm simply here to share positive support by giving an honest review based on what I've read so far. Please focus on giving your review and leave 💕☺️

EsZeus:btw. using fast passes as an argument haha I paid, and now what? ^^ Report yourself maybe ☺️
2yr
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_Nightin_gale_
_Nightin_gale_Lv2

Says the one who doesn't even know the right tense to use... RIP.

EsZeus:what a reason to report xD I didn't harass you nor did I behaved wrong. This clearly proved me only, that you indeed kinda don't know a thing about grammar. You didn't lie. You are just not familiar with the english language it seems xD thanks, made my day haha
2yr
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shrEk2o3
shrEk2o3Lv12

5/5 Amazing story, amazing characters. World background is also op. In short, this novel has a great start. Cheers to the author! What are you waiting for? Let's join Val in his adventure. READ!

2yr

Maloztska24
Maloztska24Lv13

Is the main character evil (selfish, ruthless and self-centered) or is he the kind of stupid who saves the weak and virgin girl... And is there a stupid romance too?

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Light_ray
Light_rayLv14

An incredible story knitted by author-san. Valerian, a boy with hidden powers bestowed by the Dragon God. His epic journey which is full of adventure and making himself stronger, conquering the world. Don't hesitate to read the story and support the author in his wonderful creation. Best wishes for Spirity, Bro😍.

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Gladstone_
Gladstone_Lv14

A great story The Storyline and plot is also very good The author really did his best to convey val’s emotions to the readers It got me hooked from the first chapter A Novel i would recommend to anyone

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Rappel
RappelLv15

Lets start with the rating : Writing is very stable except for the occasional typo or weird sentence. Story is rather slow but its progressing which each chapter. While tragic in the beginning it has its wholesome moments. Character are nicely done and you can see the development. You can clearly see different types of characters and how they develop over time. World is the actual weakness for now since not much is known to date. The scale is rather slow for now. If I had to point out a weakness it would be world building. Overall a top notch novel which is well worth your time. PS: There are daily chapters.

2yr
Vidit_Verma
Vidit_VermaLv4

A great opening chapter. I'm really hooked with the chapter one. So awesome and flawless. I want more of these marvelous chapter. Guys, give it a read !!!

2yr
I_am_Creator
I_am_CreatorLv3

the story have a strong world building with a lot of characters. the magic and theories were explained well. language is easy to understand with no grammatical errors. good job author

2yr
KINGAFIT
KINGAFITLv12

this is one of the best novels i have read on this app. it feels like a high end fantasy novel. when you are done with the story plz make it paperback.

2yr
Daoisty4AEf8
Daoisty4AEf8Lv2

This book is different from what I normally read it's unique and am obsessed love mc and his belief cannot wait to see how the story would progress in the future.

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