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Hedjave
HedjaveLv32yr
2022-06-12 02:19

This review was realesed when only 23 chaps were available Ok so the story is good the writing quality could be better.The story is developing at a good pace till now not too fast nor too slow.The character is still conflicting I, personally am still unable to get a complete grasp of his personality but for all I am able to understand it's good considering the world he is in.The chapters come in daily but at a late time like around 10:00 pm in my country,but today there is no chapters. The world background is good we get a better look at it with every new chap but since it's still is in early stages there is much left to be desired.

My Nano Tech Partner: Half-Spirit in Another World

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gokul_
gokul_Author

Thsnx for the lovely review~! We now have a rating ppls!!

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MyriadChanges303
MyriadChanges303Lv4

*sends you to tartarus*

gokul_:Thsnx for the lovely review~! We now have a rating ppls!!
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gokul_
gokul_Author

Weeeeeee~~! Hope I'll have fun, and I'll call u too if i find sumn interesting!! Cya in an eternity buddy!

MyriadChanges303:*sends you to tartarus*
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Hedjave
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and then he never posted after 28

gokul_:Weeeeeee~~! Hope I'll have fun, and I'll call u too if i find sumn interesting!! Cya in an eternity buddy!
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