wow, This novel is awesome. It has everything. The plot itself is gripping enough to pull audience to read it. I like the way the author had written the story not only the choice of words, but the worldbuilding is also good. Pacing is quite fast but easy enough to understand. However top of all, I like the mixture of technology made in the story. Good work

I like the Story it's something that can get you hooked from different scenarios and reminds me so much of master chief and Cortana but in a more fantasy viewpoint i would really like to read more.

This review was realesed when only 23 chaps were available Ok so the story is good the writing quality could be better.The story is developing at a good pace till now not too fast nor too slow.The character is still conflicting I, personally am still unable to get a complete grasp of his personality but for all I am able to understand it's good considering the world he is in.The chapters come in daily but at a late time like around 10:00 pm in my country,but today there is no chapters. The world background is good we get a better look at it with every new chap but since it's still is in early stages there is much left to be desired.

This novel is amazing and the plot is itself hooking. The story is fast paced but it is written so well that it is easy to understand. I really enjoyed reading the story.

I really liked the starting and loved the MC, affection for parents is hard to find. for a writer like me. Your novel is optimistic though filled with sad gloomy events. You gonna love this novel. It's worth the read.

An intriguing opening, nice plot and everything else is on point, this is definitely a big thing, good work author, I definitely recommend this novel, I will be waiting for chapters, keep up.

This is a good book with a nice plot, but the characterization was a bit off. The author needs to work on the flow of the story. And avoid some unnecessary explanations. Anyway, it's a good book. Well done author.

The plot is thrilling with lots of interesting chapters, the characters are well written (at least those we have seen till now) and the interaction between the characters is pretty good. I had a great time reading it and I hope that it will continue being as interesting as it is now. Great work author.

You have a very good sense of delivery. You deliver your words very elegantly and sophisticated. Although there are some areas that needs improvement, such as punctuation and the POVs. Over all it was a good experience. Good luck!