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2022-05-23 01:58

I usually don’t make reviews but felt that I had to after reading this book. It’s still pretty new since it only has around 30 chapters, but it already got me hooked after reading the first chapter. The two main characters are refreshing and the chemistry between them is really good. The writing quality is one of the best on this site and from what I read so far this story will become even better as it progresses. I honestly feel that as long as the author doesn’t magically become worse at writing this can become one of the top novels on this site.

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