Read until ch 68, so far is good. But for me myriad feel like a dumb person when he converse abt game mechanism or "why" , i know this supposed to make reader knew the reason but this kind of delivery makes him "dumb". Jack is not supposed to "reasoning" with guild member why he makes that decision about "everything", it makes me feel that Jack is desperate to "please" his guild member. I don't know if this will impact the character growth , i mean Jack is just ordinary guild member but now he is the guild leader its kinda make sense, if this continues it will have negative impact on this story
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