Review Detail of Daoist_Paradox in The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess

The core idea of the novel is very interesting. A mentally challenged prince son of a powerful Emperor has been abandoned, but has a saving grace in the form of five wives with various backgrounds and talents. It has all the things needed for a successful commercial web novel. Unfortunately, since this is a solo project, without any editors or prompt feedback, the entire story is full of deficiencies. 01. Grammer. This is the least serious deficiency of this novel, and it could've been easily solved had the author utilized any writing tool. For instance, Grammerly or even Google Docs. 02. Conflict between cheats. The MC has two cheats. He has been trained by various goddesses, and he also has a system. Introducing both of these cheats have made the whole 'cheat system' feel conflicted and confusing. Any one of them should've been enough. 03. Confusing character behavior. For me the last straw on the hat was the scene where the MC asks Riya for an instructor to teach him. This doesn't make sense since he has already been taught by the goddesses, who are at the top of the world. 04. Too much cheat. The background setting for the MC is very well-written and extremely interesting. However, after explaining the MC's background, we are introduced to how the MC dies and meets the goddesses. I feel like the goddess part was too much of a cheat... That's just too high of a setting! Also, the wives being the daughters of the goddess was just too much of a cheat. This is a kinda controversial point, since some readers might be okay with it, while others like me might feel it's too much. Despite all these faults, at its core this story is a solid one, a rough diamond. What it needs at this moment is a rewrite as well as a good editor. I'd recommend you give it a shot.