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DarkestCalling
DarkestCallingLv142yr
2022-08-26 05:38

overall the book is goodish my main with the story from where I stopped is author writing an op mc then nerfing idm a weak to strong story but ones where the author just blatantly goes oh hes to strong I should have thought of that let's make up an excuse and nerf him back to weak cause he was steamrolling everyone just because original concept went from a morally grey person being giving a mix of boons and punishments now it's all leaning towards punishment if you take into account the mcs personality even his boon has been turned into a negative for the most part I mean a power that changes who you are and your gender almost everytime you use it I wouldnt consider a boon and considering all the other punishments he had for his personality makes the whole original concept voided so I've dropped it I dont like when it becomes super wishy washy to the authors whims I dont mean the author cant write what they want I just dont like when they keep changing thier minds or blunt force the changes with all the subtlety of a sledge hammer just not my cup of tea overall I will say the chapters are good writing quality is good just to many negatives for me to enjoy

Monster Girl Quest: Eeveelution

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FinnsRevenge
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Was a neat and interesting story until the author decided genderbending his main character would be a super cool idea, it's not to my tastes. There will probably be more than one female form for the male(lol?) main character besides the Sylveon one too. I feel like the warning in the summary isn't sufficient in saying the main character is genderbent, a tag wouldn't hurt either.

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alivegolden1
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Reveal spoiler

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Chance_Findler
Chance_FindlerLv13

Everything is written in a amazing way but the MC is one of the best characters I have read about. He is not some child that was experimented on and was "broken" or was he a talented person that found life "boring" and god forbid if he was teenager that never lost there virginity and only thinks with there PP. Over all the story has promise and will turn out great if you continue to do what you are doing.

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HentaiGod
HentaiGodLv13

nice concept. and its monster girl quest crossover with pokemon. i would love to see a lot of 'Hora Hora' in the future if you know what i mean.

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JollyBottomDweller
JollyBottomDwellerLv4

Honestly I came into finding this with low expectations however this really has gone from something that might seem bad to something that’s a pretty good read as I honestly enjoyed reading through (currently at chapter 17) the chapters. Anyway moving on is hoping to see if this will continue or will be dropped as right now your on a roll! Also thank you for you hard work and preserving with conditions that may be un favorable in writing things like this. So really I thank you for your work. Also if your not planning on reading this here have a picture that sums it up.

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Cheeky_Monkey
Cheeky_MonkeyLv5

gender bender that's all you have to know...........

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TenkuKugan
TenkuKuganLv5

Unlike my previous thought based on the title this fan fiction is very well made......................................................................

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Cosmic_darkrai666
Cosmic_darkrai666Lv4

I liked it but i dropped it after chapter 19not to say the story is bad or anything but I'm just not that big of a fan of genderbending i didn't have a problem with Sylveon Or all the downgrades I just don't like genderbend aside from that what I've read so far was peak and i know it will continue to be. Props to the author for writing such a great storyit was perfect

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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Author should have put a gender bender tag because most of his forms are girls. 1/5 rating for this waste of time of a story. If you had the gender bender tag then I would not have bothered to read this story. Author does this at chapter 19. It was funny if it was just one of the forms but the author decided to change that to a bunch of them.

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