Review Detail of akunax in Vampire Summoner's Rebirth: Summoning The Vampire Queen At The Start

This story has some originality behind it, but writer doesnt make sure the details and pacing of the story is kept. Some chapthers are just extended paragraphs and doesnt bring the story forward. The imersion is also broken for the reader when details randomly change, as if the auther fail to remember them and writes something different on the litteral next page. ie one chapther he is the age 5, soon to be 6, then 2 chapthers later he lies to some and sais he is 9 and referencing he is 7, then 4 chapthers later he is 10, and the story described him doing the same home visit.The fmc(s) are one dimentional. They see mc and wanna marry him, no reason given or goals in life.I should note, there are alarming many pedo inserts in this story, that make you cringe AF while reading. Some of the scenes I feel are grounds enough to contact the authoreties, and I question why Webnovel would allow this story if they knew....Dont read it, report it.