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akunax7mthReplied to Allileshe is the enabler.by her ignorance, she is normalizing the abuse and putting more abuse on her kidds.read: emotionally immature adults - well documented book about it
"His constant cheating on me, how he treats the children, everything I can't see I can pretend never happens. It makes this cage bearable. If I'm cured, I could never tolerate this situation."- akunax7mthCommented
she broke his trust, made the one thing she had invalid.this is the consequences of that
'I knew you would do it, but it hurts nevertheless.' She sobbed. - akunax8mthPosted
This story has some originality behind it, but writer doesnt make sure the details and pacing of the story is kept. Some chapthers are just extended paragraphs and doesnt bring the story forward. The imersion is also broken for the reader when details randomly change, as if the auther fail to remember them and writes something different on the litteral next page. ie one chapther he is the age 5, soon to be 6, then 2 chapthers later he lies to some and sais he is 9 and referencing he is 7, then 4 chapthers later he is 10, and the story described him doing the same home visit.The fmc(s) are one dimentional. They see mc and wanna marry him, no reason given or goals in life.I should note, there are alarming many pedo inserts in this story, that make you cringe AF while reading. Some of the scenes I feel are grounds enough to contact the authoreties, and I question why Webnovel would allow this story if they knew....Dont read it, report it.
- akunax8mthCommented
simp that checked out ....
"It doesn't look like you are rotting here." - akunax8mthCommented
weak... disgusting, and this is our mc? that will rise and crush all? yea riiite...
After her death, he was so heartbroken and depressed that he had relied on alcohol to forget his pain and most of the time he would lay here and there like a lifeless puppet and had developed a trauma of losing everybody around him which haunted him and became his nightmare. - akunax8mthCommented
are we sure this isnt the mind of a cat?
I tried to escape from them with my humble steed, but we were hopelessly captured by the vicious and strong hands of my parents. - akunax8mthReplied to Ewan_Shin
tbf, thats how u eat paste in eu
The latter finally said nothing more. She took the spoon and fork and started eating. - akunax8mthReplied to Manhua_Realm
tbf, most ppl there have solar batterybanks
"Before we start anything, I should go to the bank and get my savings out and get enough supplies to live off of for a while. I also need to go home and get more clothes…. My phone and my laptop…." Blake had a lot to plan for, now that everything was truly real. It was clear that things were different now than before since he had a true dragon sitting in his lap. - akunax8mthCommented
dropped
Rudy was hit by the truck passing at full speed. - akunax8mthReplied to Santy_Melay
its funny, i read this after writing a similar review after 54 chapters.IA mc is acting like every other emo u see in highschool.Pretending to be a chad, but is a simp.Its so easy to see the victimizing and fake bravado, when u realize he is only "cool" when he has backup, but a dog when he is alone vs someone strong
- akunax8mthCommented
what trash writing...
"Shit… first, I suddenly die. Then, I reincarnate in a world, and two seconds later, I find someone who wants to kill me… is this supposed to be some kind of sick joke?" - akunax8mthCommented
strike 2.first was the bad grammer.if this doesnt get better soon, its another potato novel thats dropped
"I hope that I won't end up in jail for that… Oh, well… he wanted to stab me, and he probably killed a human just now… so I don't have to feel guilty about it." - akunax8mthCommented
grade a virgin writer xD
"Anhhh...ahhh...i am.... dying anhhhhhhhhhh~" kia cried out in pleasure as her clitoris got vigorously rubbed like a scratch card by Anon's fingers. - akunax8mthReplied to SlySmileCh 53 Why Bother?
- akunax8mthCommented
cringe
Second is that guy...He is reading a book and not saying anything in this conversation which is making others look like fools but this guy is the most aware person here he is calculating every possibility by judging all the talks in this room. - akunax8mthReplied to Anime_Antagonist
fyi, story pace has rng at start, good luck if u will, and usually is the baseline of why a story goes well.critizising good luck at start of stories is basically critizising all novels, so Im very curious what should have been different
The forest in question was actually only an hour away by bike, just outside the city. It was a nature reserve that people could hike through. But normally closed at night. He was not sure of the exact location, but he knew it was deep in the forest. - akunax8mthPosted
I give this good rating cause bad ones get deleted.This is a horrible story. The pacing is wrong, the world dynamic is interesting at first, but story breaking later.Wierd event pushed for plot and pervy self-inserts. Anything remotely interesting is written in circles, then ruined by forgetting its own story.I highly suspect the writer has several ppl ghost writing, and non know what the others know...I loved ToS, but if you read this due to that, you will be disapointed.Its a story about an outcast(emo) thats so much more mature than everyone else, but his fragile mental makes him a dog to everyone he meets. fun to read if u like soyboys acting as chads
- akunax8mthCommentedCh 50 Sweet Retribution
- akunax8mthReplied to r0cket
its not a bridge between planets, only from surface to space
For example, the project that Hans had approved was actually three parts. He intended to build space elevators on Earth, the Moon, and Mars. Which would not only vastly decrease the time it took to travel between the three celestial bodies, but also would allow for much easier transport of materials from Mars and the Moon to Earth.