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I enjoyed reading it and I’m looking forward to newest chapters, I barely notice and grammar mistakes. One chapter each day, even tho I’d like it to be two, but as author has multiple novels, I’m fine with one. Story & character development are great. The only thing lacking is world background, overally it’s worth your time.

I read more than what was posted so i know a bit more than others This is a story about a vampire galactic emperor who dies and has to start over as a normal extremely untalented human child through the grace of his enemy you don't find a domineering ruler when you start the story but you will find a loser full of regrets he is not planning on repeating this time around you will also see as the stone cold vampire discovers humane emotions and how he had them all along but just hid them deep in his heart as he closed it from the world all while killing the minions of his enemy/benefactor who are aiming to kill everyone in his new world along the way he might even find love though it is unknown whether he will be able to handle all of them or not and not wanting to have the same regrets he is sure to spend time with his family in some lovely family moments trying to have some relaxed moments during his hectic life so overall expect an old soul trying to rediscover himself as his family helps him open up all while he is hunting and fighting for blood and power(mostly behind thier backs) with some occasional slice of life moments

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another pancakewitch Story i love it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I believe this is going to be as good as your other books maybe better so please continue with your work and don’t be bothered by any criticism and write your books how you wanna bye bye.

I'd say it's pretty nice, for grammar it's I would say it's great and so is the world background and I would say what made especially great are the characters, their ain't that much stiffness in conversations and the characters have their bit of complexity...welp enough of that and just read it

Great writing quality. The author understands how to write characters and world settings. The story is interesting and can entertain its audience. However, there is one flaw that will stop me from reading this story. Well, I say a flaw but to others it might not be. I think the story is progressing way too slow. I've read up to the locked chapters and feel like there has been little to almost no progress. I think what's been written in the 80+ something chapters could have been written in 40. Nonetheless, it's still a great story and hope the author continues to do what they enjoy.