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John_Kula
John_KulaLv41yr
2022-12-29 07:05

I'm writing this review as of chapter 212. I am an avid reader of PancakesWitch's novels and I can say that this is also another great addition to the lineup that is definitely worth reading! If that's all you needed to know, you can just stop reading now. But, I shall continue a bit more in depth with some comments and criticisms. I'll start with the positives. I like that training is where the MC gains a large amount of his power rather than through just grinding exp to level due to exp requirements to level being so high for him as well as his circumstances. I also like that he's not some weeb from Earth that is hyped to get a system like most others would be. He actually is so ancient that he finds the system and it's game-like elements kind of childish and bothersome. He also achieved his power in his past life without a system so he isn't even relying on it all that much. It's just a little bonus thing to him. Now for the negatives. The curses he gets that make him need 100X more exp to level, 100X more proficiency to gain and level skills, makes it so that his growth is slower, but each level gives more than it would for anyone else. While this is a fair tradeoff, from a narrative perspective, it means that he is growing slower than most other protagonists would. I don't dislike that inherently, it's just something you have to get used to. It's action packed while still feeling somewhat slower paced. He also doesn't get many skills as a result of the curses. I think the idea is for him to gradually grow up over the course of years to gain more power. That does seem like the direction the story is going, especially since it would be very weird for an 8 year old to have a legitimate harem. He is gaining skills to gain more exp and with time he will probably gain more opportunities to gain exp. So hopefully, the story will pick up in pace at that point. Until then, I'm quite enjoying this!

Vampire Summoner's Rebirth: Summoning The Vampire Queen At The Start

PancakesWitch
4.8
1169 Chs

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SayHelloToGrape999
SayHelloToGrape999Lv13

is the mc still 8 later in the story? cause it has 600 chaps when is the harem gonna come in?

1yr
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The_Silent_Death
The_Silent_DeathLv1

Nice 👍👍👍

1yr
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John_Annex
John_AnnexLv1

Wait. so as of chapter 200 he's still 8 years old? Well I was thinking of reading this but that kind makes me not want too, so thanks for mentioning that

11mth
10
esperomejorar
esperomejorarLv1

600 chicos? yaoi?

SayHelloToGrape999:is the mc still 8 later in the story? cause it has 600 chaps when is the harem gonna come in?
6mth
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ancientwatcher
ancientwatcherLv15

Reveal spoiler

1yr

Hizu
HizuLv13

I enjoyed reading it and I’m looking forward to newest chapters, I barely notice and grammar mistakes. One chapter each day, even tho I’d like it to be two, but as author has multiple novels, I’m fine with one. Story & character development are great. The only thing lacking is world background, overally it’s worth your time.

1yr
isekai_seeker
isekai_seekerLv5

I read more than what was posted so i know a bit more than others This is a story about a vampire galactic emperor who dies and has to start over as a normal extremely untalented human child through the grace of his enemy you don't find a domineering ruler when you start the story but you will find a loser full of regrets he is not planning on repeating this time around you will also see as the stone cold vampire discovers humane emotions and how he had them all along but just hid them deep in his heart as he closed it from the world all while killing the minions of his enemy/benefactor who are aiming to kill everyone in his new world along the way he might even find love though it is unknown whether he will be able to handle all of them or not and not wanting to have the same regrets he is sure to spend time with his family in some lovely family moments trying to have some relaxed moments during his hectic life so overall expect an old soul trying to rediscover himself as his family helps him open up all while he is hunting and fighting for blood and power(mostly behind thier backs) with some occasional slice of life moments

2yr
FallenEclispes2
FallenEclispes2Lv1

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Iles
IlesLv13

another pancakewitch Story i love it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
TheGermanelder
TheGermanelderLv14

I believe this is going to be as good as your other books maybe better so please continue with your work and don’t be bothered by any criticism and write your books how you wanna bye bye.

2yr
SilverMaid
SilverMaidLv4

The book is pretty slow paced at the beginning. could been better with a bit of timeskip in the childhood arc. it takes 200 chapters still 8 yrs old. Aside from that its pretty engaging afterwards. Tho the curse is pretty annoying at the beginning its a really hard nerf.

7mth
Alkk
AlkkLv3

I'd say it's pretty nice, for grammar it's I would say it's great and so is the world background and I would say what made especially great are the characters, their ain't that much stiffness in conversations and the characters have their bit of complexity...welp enough of that and just read it

2yr
JoshS
JoshSLv4

Great writing quality. The author understands how to write characters and world settings. The story is interesting and can entertain its audience. However, there is one flaw that will stop me from reading this story. Well, I say a flaw but to others it might not be. I think the story is progressing way too slow. I've read up to the locked chapters and feel like there has been little to almost no progress. I think what's been written in the 80+ something chapters could have been written in 40. Nonetheless, it's still a great story and hope the author continues to do what they enjoy.

2yr
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