This story have potential, it is interesting and prose The things are well placed characters personalities are defining. You are doing nice work~~ Keep up the good work author, I'll be reading
Plafu
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LIKEFist of all thank you for your feedback and second I know that is not the best I’ not good with grammar and it is not even my main language but still thanks for your f eedback
Nekotakuu:In synopsis mother who live in china* Not which live in china
Author you can try website call Grammar look up When used with grammarly and docs it is very good for editing
Plafu:Fist of all thank you for your feedback and second I know that is not the best I’ not good with grammar and it is not even my main language but still thanks for your f eedback
Kinshikanata:Author you can try website call Grammar look up When used with grammarly and docs it is very good for editing