Awesome chapter!!
You got your dialogues and para balanced now,
Honestly I was about to give you my powerstones... But then I felt the author who recommended me this novel would feel sad~~
So I'll just a do a cheering dance
This novel is good novel, I look forward to more.
I am really pleased with settings and the way it is presented, author did a great job I wish they'll continue grinding I feel graced to get a chance to read this stuff
Pros- Good plot
Likeable characters
Good game mechanics
Regular updates
Bing watch worthy
Cons- grammar in some chapters
Some transition
Either way I am enjoying it very much all the best writer