Honest reviews are here.. This novel is not good, but I can't say it is bad either.. This is not reincarnation or transmigrated MC.. This novel is about the MC, which is a prince of an empire who has not awaken any mana in his body.. Because of that, MC has been exiled by his own father and treated as garbage by whole country.. Later, MC awakens with help from "Nephilim Spirit," which changes his race, guiding and teaching him aether (better version of mana in this novel) and nether body, teach him alchemy and many other knowledge of the past.. That Spirit has a VERY VERY annoying character.. Seriously.. Well, the author is the one who created the character like that.. I kinda hate the way the author wrote such as, MC is not strong, super slow growth MC, many unexplained mysteries, there to many slice of life scene (80% of this novel) than fighting/training scene, slow chapter update, and lastly, many skip scene.. 1. Many skip scenes ■Let me give an example of what I mean by many skip scenes.. Let's say you watch Detective conan anime.. Mostly, detective conan is divided by two episodes for MC solve the case.. Imagine you watch 1st episode and then the case end.. You thought that the case would continue on the next episode, but it actually is not.. Because on the next episode or any further ahead, there are no cases related to that.. You feel like, "Seriously, what happened to that case??" Yes, there are many these types of scenes in this novel.. 2. Weak and slow growth ■I had caught up with the latest chapters.. For me, the MC growth is quite slow.. Tooooo slow.. The author did try to brainwash his reader by keep saying in this novel how fast the MC growth and how strong MC is.. But it is not.. ■The growth is too slow for me.. The author also says that MC is super hardworking, but to me, the MC barely increases his stat throughout his training.. There are many arguable facts for this novel.. For example, Aether is supposed to be a better version of Mana, like ways better than pure Mana, and we won't see any advantages of it.. We can see the advantage of nether body thru MC stat and compared them to other people stat which MC as 1st circle warrior stat are at same level as 3rd circle warrior stat.. ■But the author keeps showing that MC can't win any fight against 2nd circle.. The author even writes thru MC's word, "That 2nd circle guys can defeat me in 99 different ways even when I fight him with all my strength." Even though MC is at 1st circle, his stat is at 3rd circle, but he can't beat 2nd circle if that person uses his mana. Dude, MC has Aether, and that thing is supposed to be wayyyyys powerful than mana.. It is the same as MC affinities. He has an affinity for time, space, life, and death, but he is not using them during fight.. You can say that this author is not a good writing a fighting novel because most of this novel is like the "MC slice of life" type of novel.. 3. Unexplained mysteries ■The author also loves to add mysteries it many situations.. For example, the author wrote about "the letter" and kept talking about it without mentioning what "that" is.. There are also situations where MC talks with his master about "that power" and talking about it when we dunno what he actually means.. ■The author justified it by saying, "MC is too weak to know or it useless to know. It is just a burden, if you know.." Yes, unfortunately, there are many more similar situations where the author keeps saying "that" without explaining what he meant.. There is also a scene that suddenly, the author ends it just like that.. Like the scene when MC died, no scene what happened in his family situations.. Like how they react, his father, or his mother, or someone who hate MC or his twin sister who adore him.. That is it, no update related to them at all.. This is not OP novel YET.. Maybe this is the author 1st fighting novel, so there are a lot of things he needs to improve.. I hope he gets better in writing.. I will come and read again when this novel reaches his endings.. But seeing this novel barely updated, I'm not sure if I am still alive when that time comes..
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I came here to read the reviews because I was tired of the unexplained events and the weak MC. I wondered if anyone agreed with me or if I was the only one who thought so, but now I understand that the problem is not with me, but with the story. This story is definitely not about the OP MC, at least not for now.
