A worthy book by all standards. Grammar is incredible. Action scenes, out of this world. Character design is great. World background, acceptable and the story development is just on point. No info. Dumps too. I doubt there will be a critic here on the review page. There's just no fault.

What do i even say aside, BEAUTIFUL WORK!!! I'm so in love with the twins. Their strength makes me wanna hit the gym and their actions are so lifelike. Jada is an agrieved child in an adult skin hellbent on revenge and Joda Is the calm, wise brother but a monster on the inside. If I ever want a coach for my own writing, I seriously hitting this author up. I call dibs.

This book drops you into the action and quickly give the story of a prince who must bring the world to peace (but not before dying repeatedly). The writing is decent and although is only has a few chapters at present, it has a lot of promise!

The story starts with lots of action. The fight scenes are described in great detail. The writing style is very enjoyable to read. The main character's actions seem logical and his feelings and emotions are well conveyed. The reader finds out more about where the novel takes place along with the main character as the story unfolds. This is a very interesting book to read!

Wow. I like how you started this novel! Amazing work! I'd rarely read an ML book, but the details you gave in the starting scene was so vivid. Even I'm not good at vivid scenes. I couldn't stop reading. Even though it was a fighting scene, I liked it very much. Very good author. I'd continue to read the novel. Please update!

Ohh!Man this novel is full of action scenes In first chapter when I was reading there was sentence where it was written something like he was searching for someone who is special for him I thought that that person was girl but that special person was his brother.. Lol!😂 This novel contain Ninja samurai type people if like action novels like me you should definitely try this book,there is some minor mistakes which is normal because no one is perfect Waiting for more updates...[img=update] Keep it up author[img=recommend]

Writing Quality seems to have improved from when I started his other book, updating stability is amazing, there’s only 5 chapters out so I can’t really comment on the others so just take 4

I have come into solid work and I praise the author for giving something enjoyable. Writing quality and story quality is up to my standards. Having also passed with flying colors! Characters and character interactions were justified. I must say more chaps and this will get what it deserves! I am liking it so far! [img=recommend]

I like the opening plot of the novel. It shows pain, love and determination. The novel altogether has a nice plot. Keeps the readers on their toes and making them itch to find out more. 👍👍