Ancient Feud: Shadows Of The Past

A worthy book by all standards. Grammar is incredible. Action scenes, out of this world. Character design is great. World background, acceptable and the story development is just on point. No info. Dumps too. I doubt there will be a critic here on the review page. There's just no fault.

What do i even say aside, BEAUTIFUL WORK!!! I'm so in love with the twins. Their strength makes me wanna hit the gym and their actions are so lifelike. Jada is an agrieved child in an adult skin hellbent on revenge and Joda Is the calm, wise brother but a monster on the inside. If I ever want a coach for my own writing, I seriously hitting this author up. I call dibs.

This book drops you into the action and quickly give the story of a prince who must bring the world to peace (but not before dying repeatedly). The writing is decent and although is only has a few chapters at present, it has a lot of promise!

The story starts with lots of action. The fight scenes are described in great detail. The writing style is very enjoyable to read. The main character's actions seem logical and his feelings and emotions are well conveyed. The reader finds out more about where the novel takes place along with the main character as the story unfolds. This is a very interesting book to read!

Wow. I like how you started this novel! Amazing work! I'd rarely read an ML book, but the details you gave in the starting scene was so vivid. Even I'm not good at vivid scenes. I couldn't stop reading. Even though it was a fighting scene, I liked it very much. Very good author. I'd continue to read the novel. Please update!

Ohh!Man this novel is full of action scenes In first chapter when I was reading there was sentence where it was written something like he was searching for someone who is special for him I thought that that person was girl but that special person was his brother.. Lol!😂 This novel contain Ninja samurai type people if like action novels like me you should definitely try this book,there is some minor mistakes which is normal because no one is perfect Waiting for more updates...[img=update] Keep it up author[img=recommend]

Writing Quality seems to have improved from when I started his other book, updating stability is amazing, there’s only 5 chapters out so I can’t really comment on the others so just take 4

I have come into solid work and I praise the author for giving something enjoyable. Writing quality and story quality is up to my standards. Having also passed with flying colors! Characters and character interactions were justified. I must say more chaps and this will get what it deserves! I am liking it so far! [img=recommend]

I like the opening plot of the novel. It shows pain, love and determination. The novel altogether has a nice plot. Keeps the readers on their toes and making them itch to find out more. 👍👍

What an intense beginning to a surely intense story. I loved the opening chapters and the build-up and tension they bring along, very hooking opening. The characters are also very interesting and the writing quality is superb. Looking forward to a lot more, would recommend it to everyone!!

The concept of the story seems interesting. It doesn't gives the vibes of a cliché novel that is usually found on this website. That is why i would suggest that you should novel a try...

Okay so this story is still in the beginning phase but I have no qualms that it's going to be big. The opening chapter is catchy and everything else is. The characters I have seen so far are shrouded in mystery and they really make me want more. I don't review much but this story has a really good start.

This review is occurring in the early stages, but I still find that this story has drawn my interest. The grammar seems to be on point and doesn't detract from the story at all. The personalities of the individuals we've met are starting to be developed, and it's exciting to see how they will shape up over time! The world building is starting to take form and isn't happening in the way of 'infodumps' which is great news for everyone! The first chapter leaves us wondering and questioning, which is great! I hope you give this book a try, it's definitely worth a read!

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Good job author, you improved chapafter another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work

really good book so far definitely deserves way more attention and love them it gets. wouldn't be surprised if this novel eventually blows up.

count me in, in this journey Joda 😃 All the best author , keep up with the good work. I believe it will be a masterpiece you will be proud of ❤

Absolutely stunning details! This book truly throws you in the action of it all. This would definitely make a outstanding movie, I applaud you!

Ok, so the synopsis itself is eye-catching and attracted me to the story. The grammar is fine and well written, I await how the story will turn out to be!!!

An early review,even for me but this book deserves it. An intense action packed start, followed by more action that don't feel forced. Like you legit know why a fight must break out in a chapter and the reasons are sensible too. Don't even get me started on the fight scenes themselves. This guy can describe the best fight scenes ever. I've read my vampire system and other great books and I know how some of these books don't satisfy the reader's thirst for more action. Well,this guy solves that problem easily and makes you feel like your spectating the fight in person. Just amazing. This book is definitely gonna be big. I can tell.