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I really like the concept/ world this is set in. But I stopped at the paywall. The story just wasn't enticing enough for me to spend the 10 coins per chapter. The system always puts the MC in situations that could be easily avoided and then laments the MCs incompetence. For example aura. Apparently the Mc is a walking pheromone fountain which causes everybody to go crazy for her and and even causes her to be wanted in the entire universe because the dragon king got the hots for her. It could've been easily avoided if the system just told her but it didn't because of "reasons". Also the system constantly mocks her for not being able to read or get the common sense of this universe she just got chucked into. And not in a nice banter way, moe of a demeaning way, calling her stupid. (I don't think the author wanted it to come across that way but it definitely does.)
Lost Soul: Nine-tailed Fox's Transmigrations!
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Thanks for the review. As for the reason why the system can't disclose infos to her it's because she needs to know everything on her own. the system is there to help her level up, not to become her nanny and explain everything. it could help in certain matters but regarding the new concepts FL nerds to find out on her own as for why she can't learn anything and being called stupid the actual reason is a spoiler which will be revealed in the future thanks for giving it a try.đ
Yes, but calling her stupid gives the reader the impression that she is stupid. It does not encourage the reader, but rather irritates them with her stupidity as a college student. Although it may appear to you as a joke, to us readers who lack context and are looking for a good reason to stay and read the book, the main character's stupidity does not support that. In addition to all of this negative stuff happening at the beginning of the novel, you'll get to learn about the story you're reading and decide whether or not it's worth reading.
SB_Moon:Thanks for the review. As for the reason why the system can't disclose infos to her it's because she needs to know everything on her own. the system is there to help her level up, not to become her nanny and explain everything. it could help in certain matters but regarding the new concepts FL nerds to find out on her own as for why she can't learn anything and being called stupid the actual reason is a spoiler which will be revealed in the future thanks for giving it a try.đ
In this case you don't really see the MC as stupid tho... She just isn't given the information she needs and expected to perform as if she knew. Makes the reader detest the system, not the MC. (At least if the reader can emphasize with such a situation. I can and I despise people that do that to others.)
Dao_Of_Patience:Yes, but calling her stupid gives the reader the impression that she is stupid. It does not encourage the reader, but rather irritates them with her stupidity as a college student. Although it may appear to you as a joke, to us readers who lack context and are looking for a good reason to stay and read the book, the main character's stupidity does not support that. In addition to all of this negative stuff happening at the beginning of the novel, you'll get to learn about the story you're reading and decide whether or not it's worth reading.
It just seems like the story is written in a way that almost tries to push the reader away by speedrunning a bunch of tags rather than to let us learn about our 2/3 main characters and the world they inhabit. Heck, we haven't even seen a system screen in 21 chapters and although that's not inherently bad the system screen would shed some light on just what is happening.
SB_Moon:Thanks for the review. As for the reason why the system can't disclose infos to her it's because she needs to know everything on her own. the system is there to help her level up, not to become her nanny and explain everything. it could help in certain matters but regarding the new concepts FL nerds to find out on her own as for why she can't learn anything and being called stupid the actual reason is a spoiler which will be revealed in the future thanks for giving it a try.đ
Malthemute:It just seems like the story is written in a way that almost tries to push the reader away by speedrunning a bunch of tags rather than to let us learn about our 2/3 main characters and the world they inhabit. Heck, we haven't even seen a system screen in 21 chapters and although that's not inherently bad the system screen would shed some light on just what is happening.
so you're saying to even get to the main story you have to read over 50 chapters spend over 280 coins you realize how ridiculous that is and it's not to mention how much time it will take to get to that point what percentage of people that try reading your book come close to that point in the story not trying to be rude but I don't see any logic in the way you set this up
SB_Moon:main story starts from vol 2.