It just seems like the story is written in a way that almost tries to push the reader away by speedrunning a bunch of tags rather than to let us learn about our 2/3 main characters and the world they inhabit. Heck, we haven't even seen a system screen in 21 chapters and although that's not inherently bad the system screen would shed some light on just what is happening.

So I haven't read too much, but it's a good world with lots of details and seems interesting, but the story as a whole just moves way to god damn fast. It's like the author has a checklist of tags and cool things they want to do in the first 20 or chapters the MC is naive to an un-godly degree. Making the story just hard to read. We also keep moving the perspective character around and around even within the same chapter, and it is just head-ache-inducing. I think it is a story with a well-built world and potential, but there was next to no thought put into the novel's start whatsoever.

EDIT: I forgot to mention read up to chapter 28 Forced Bond at time of writing.

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Is this a repeated chapter?

thrust her I mean sure but is this a typo?

Lord of Mysteries I haven't but I have read a decent chunk of Reverend Insanity and I must say it's very good, but it has its flaws for example the story pulls a Deus ex cicada twice in two arcs almost back to back for an example.

I'm loving the story so far but I think it would help it if when Yuki is in the game world you referred to her as Ryu as you do with Trisha and Chi

Is this a typo for Ryu to be called Yuki?

Is strength suppose to be miss-spelt or is that a mistake

I agree with the issue of the synopsis. It is arrogant and bad, done. As for the other points, I like the characters, both mains and sides, especially the two mc's and their strange brotherly bond, which I can say from having a brother myself to be somewhat true to life, not the 10 billion-year-old grim reaper. Yes, some are a little cliche but they all seem to be thinking, which is a good thing, now on the power system. It is a cultivation novel, so levelling up is gonna be the same old same old. The elemental affinities are relatively standard but, in my opinion, not done horribly. For the knowledge side of things and telling the MC's information, you referred to another novel, saying that they didn't know this because I assume it is revealed later. When it comes to the goal of the novel, it is clearly playing the long game. The sky above the sky, so to speak, so I think we should treat it as a slow burn when it comes to main plots. But something I do like about this novel the writer is BOLD.

Take your time dude, but I recommend you try and get a back log going it should stop any extra stress even if you have to not post something on the privilege for a couple days

Ouch, that's a little to close to home.

I haven't read the new restart yet but I do think this is a good choice and I admire your bravery to do it. I found that the start of this novel was way to fast and maybe a tad messy