This is why I still read web novels, something like this is just too fun. Most wn and cn are copy pastes of each other with the original being mid af already but every now and then someone has an idea and the ability to write it. This is one of the best novels I have read on this site, maybe the best I have read here. Only two issues that I can see is the story is a little tangled with scifi, fantasy, and video game story elements stacked together being a little jarring. The other is the problem with fourth wall breaks, I don't get why the character needs to be from earth. It didn't add anything and the story could only have improved with him being a resident of the world already instead of having the jarring and immersion breaking "in the novels" line thrown in. Tldr good work I like your writing style.
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