I have read up to the current arc, mostly with free pass, so do pardon me. As much as the concept of this story is good, the writing quality and ideas seems to diminish after a while. First was the sudden marriage thing but later handled cleanly. Second was the sudden lack of magic talent which was supposed to apply to the original Vicent only. It was clear his magic talent was way to superior to most mana practitioners but suddenly, he cant learn next tier mana arts. Third was the sudden blindness which makes no sense and adds little to none to the story. From that point onward, ita like the story just go along with the flow; 'whatever comes'. It became bland without any substantial goal or target. The only end time target is the celestials which also seems bland as things are added as time goes by. There is also no short term target. Vicent just do whatever fits. The romance is also all over the place. Honestly, Yulia would have been a good option along the way but later thrown off. The romance is like a switch, on and off, new and old, and so on. Update stability is really high up there but the story quality dropped really low. Also, some characters are not properly fleshed out, they are more like 'add or do as needed' instead of a 3 dimensional character design. Anyway, I am still hoping for some improvement. If these can be worked on, the story will have a massive improvement and will definently skyrocket. Don't mind my grammar and thanks for the chapters.
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A good review. dropping this novel
