Review Detail of razaza_69 in Star Wars: Youngling

Apart from som butchering of the english language every now and then, Its hard to keep track of who is speaking an when. Coversations are setup right next to eachother and there is no indication of who is speaking. Also dunno if its because its translated but some words just dont fit into the context of coversations and sentences. Otherwise ok plot apart from his lack of social finesse (dislike for) other kids. Its hard to imagin his parents not realising hes not only a antisocial but probly a jaded reincarnated man or psycopath .