razaza_69
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ah, the usual suspects
Apart from som butchering of the english language every now and then, Its hard to keep track of who is speaking an when. Coversations are setup right next to eachother and there is no indication of who is speaking. Also dunno if its because its translated but some words just dont fit into the context of coversations and sentences. Otherwise ok plot apart from his lack of social finesse (dislike for) other kids. Its hard to imagin his parents not realising hes not only a antisocial but probly a jaded reincarnated man or psycopath .
As i understand it, wizards, like normal people focus on one or 2 subjects. Like if you study to become a doctor, then youre not gonna dive in to all branches of medicin, you usually specialise in one field. So in a way you are right wizards are lazy, but so are normal humans when it comes to science
Pretty disgusting chapter to be honest, also didn't know that drugging people with what I assume is GHB and ecstacy ( which dosent exist in 1400s) made people okay with getting raped... usually breaking an individuals moral or personal code, leads to severe depression, anger and distrust instead sexy fun times
Bad writing normally destroys a story, not the harem itself... unless he starts a heavenly beauty collection service, i think it is possible to maneuver it into a good romance. But yes it would probably be easier with just one romantic interest
At least then he would get to use his French language skills