The author uses flowery language that is typical for Chinese novels. I really loved it! I wished more authors would write this poetically. There were some grammar and spelling errors that threw me off, however. The protagonist cones off as quite an unlikeable (to me) brat, but that will probably change after his transmigration đ The story is dense (despite the flowery language!) and mirrors the atmosphere and protagonist's lifestyle. The legend used as a story hook is beautiful and creative. Please keep up the good work!
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