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babydragon25
babydragon25Lv12yr
2022-06-21 02:45

The writing just needs a little adjustments and asides from that perfecto so I would suggest that people try it out. It's very nice and interesting to read

(BL) Transmigration: Latent Intrinsic Love

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4.8
188 Chs

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Hoeny_bear
Hoeny_bearLv1

Amazing...I super love Jian Yu's character. Such a naughty boy..surely I would love to read the romance between the leads..transmigration is something that's clicking me..how would he transmigrate to other world and what a cliffhanger..he was a consort prince in past life

2yr

diddingsdddd
diddingsddddLv1

You have a strong grasp on telling the story, your writing is clear and moves the story along. Judging from the first chapter alone i can tell your wary of info dumps so good job on that. -----------However, the plot, pacing, dialogue and believability, sorta takes a massive back seat. This is mainly due to clarity, your trying to mask the main character in mystery, even to the point of masking the other characters and clouding your story. The next problem you have is slipping back and forth between present tense and past tense. When it comes to this genre the number one killer is clarity, what's is happening ,why is happening, who's saying what? (Who is the female officer, and if they spoke for over an hour it is highly unlikely that she didn't introduce herself already, and highly unlikely we don't know any other the character's names). Last piece of advice , if you have to put something in a glossary for readers to understand, then you did a poor job presenting it in your story. I don't see info dumps, so I doubt you will have this problem, but then again, zero info within an unclear story can be equally as bad.

2yr
JiggyGizzy
JiggyGizzyLv14

This story is entertaining and a page turner, the writing style is easy to follow and the ML is a fascinating character and how he relates to others around him is unique and quite interesting to read.The story flows well and makes me want to keep reading, thank you for this story writer and keep on updating, highly recommend it!

2yr
OnizukaShinu
OnizukaShinuLv11

That opening was amazing, it captures my heart instantly. Jian Yu is a lovable playboy that is able to charm the heart of the characters and the heart of the readers. I have no complaints so far. World building is great, the environment, the tone of the emotions, all are beautifully written. Writing quality is top notch! Great job author and Fight On!

2yr
DurojaiyeAdedayo
DurojaiyeAdedayoLv3

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Gautam_Goyal_
Gautam_Goyal_Lv2

Kika (my cat) gave you 5 stars for writing quality and then 5 for background later. YOU HAVE THE APPROVAL OF THE HOLY CAT! Increase your updating stability though.

2yr
Princess_anos123
Princess_anos123Lv1

Amazing work!!! Got me hooked to the core!!! The writing style is amazing!!! Good plotline and the characters are amazing and addictive!!! Waiting for more updates! [img=update] Keep it up author!

2yr
Taiha
TaihaLv1

Reveal spoiler

2yr
_Nightin_gale_
_Nightin_gale_Lv2

Honestly, the storyline has a LOT of potential, especially because Jian Yu's character is so refreshing and unique. Just some errors here and there disrupt the reading flow, otherwise the book is pretty fun. Hope the stepmom's not all that bad. keep going!!!

2yr
Senpaipuku
SenpaipukuLv4

The author's writing style is praiseworthy and I like the chemistry between characters. ........................................................

2yr
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