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ZerusLv152yr
2022-05-12 03:39

sorry will definitely be a really good story but the mc is the first 7 chapters all the time just crying. I just can't read any more. The mc upsets me too much.

My Evil System

MiuNovels
4.4
236 Chs

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MiuNovelsAuthor

thank you for the review 😂 he is really whiny at the start. but after 20 chaps nd he acquired evil heart, he will change . . . and now im afraid what ill hear next is, the mc is too cold Lelz there s no in between 😂

2yr
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Daoist_CultureLv15

Sprinkle some lemons on that evil heart😎...and you have a solution.

MiuNovels:thank you for the review 😂 he is really whiny at the start. but after 20 chaps nd he acquired evil heart, he will change . . . and now im afraid what ill hear next is, the mc is too cold Lelz there s no in between 😂
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2yr
Hacker_69Lv4

so I can skip all of it and just straight to chapter 20?

MiuNovels:thank you for the review 😂 he is really whiny at the start. but after 20 chaps nd he acquired evil heart, he will change . . . and now im afraid what ill hear next is, the mc is too cold Lelz there s no in between 😂
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2yr
Andrey_MLv3

yeah you can. There's actually nothing important in the first 20 chapters.

Hacker_69:so I can skip all of it and just straight to chapter 20?
2yr
matabalaoxD_2Lv13

Not to cool only other personality.

MiuNovels:thank you for the review 😂 he is really whiny at the start. but after 20 chaps nd he acquired evil heart, he will change . . . and now im afraid what ill hear next is, the mc is too cold Lelz there s no in between 😂
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rampa2510Lv14

Great plot. Start will be very slow because the author is introducing all the plot elements and the wimpy character side is very annoying but trust me it gets better within some time. Give it a try and you won't be disappointed.

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Rafi_Uddin_3519Lv2

Just let the evil mc take over just cant bear to read the wimpy mc either merge them or just kill off the wimpy one ............................

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Andrey_MLv3

So inconsistent. The author keeps on contradicting themselves with their own words and many things make no sense. I kept on reading it because I thought 'At least this isn't as inconsistent as The Flash,' but then it became as inconsistent as The Flash. For example, why does the MC not do anything at all to help defeat the monsters when he's so overpowered and nice? And the Evil Heart has a duration that has to end before it gets reactivated, yet the author insists that the duration will never end?

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Hacker_69Lv4

hello author 👋 when you said after chapter 20 he will be evil and it was true and it is so cool and I love it and also please make more because I really love it and some of us loved it too so please make more and don't over work your self and thank you

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YourDad_Lv5

Reveal spoiler

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IglirgusLv11

A few bits of information if you even want to proceed with reading this novel : (-) MC is slow to adapt and he is a “wimp”, meaning if you came here for an actual villain this isn’t the novel you want or if you came here for an intelligent and calculating MC also do not read this book (+) The premise of the story is interesting where you get this fantasy world with Gods, Adventurers (Players), Classic ranking systems like Silver, Gold, Platinum (*) The characters are decent, the novel is set in first person and thus heavily relies on dialogue and interactions for you to know more about them which unfortunately means World Background takes a few points off despite an interesting setting due to the fact that it is strictly first person with lack of early-novel exploration events (*) Writing quality is decent for a webnovel nothing much to say though the main issues are typos which isn’t that bad ====••===••===••===••===••===••==== Writing Quality : 3.5/5 nothing crazy but not horrible Updating Stability : 5/5 its still updating with a good amount of chapters to read [Slow-Paced] Story Development : 3/5 its ok, the MC does get around to doing things but its nothing much and at the moment hes still within the starter area Character Design : 3/5 not a personal fan of the MC but it does make for more “danger” when it comes to him going out World Background : 4/5 unexplored for the most part but has a lot of potential ================================ Tips for the author : - It helps to switch between the MC and the people he has interacted with in order to develop characters and the world more easily and it also lets us take a break from prolonged firstperson view which can be exhausting and boring to read - Fix typos - Lots of world potential and character potential so capitalize on it

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Ovierode_IgoruLv12

This is a good novel with a great plot. Although the MC is winey at the start after chapter 20 he turns cold. all in all great novel so far. Hope author doesn't ruin it by adding a harem as they just slow the plot down and are badly written

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kuuhhLv15

well hard to note this book cause you have two story. One with the dumb/should die mc that except for taking our money doesn't serve anything. I just skip all his parts. then you have the story with the real mc, that embrace the world. 0 stars for the parts with the thing that serve as the "good" more like retard but well, and 4stars for the part with the other one.

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The_prezismokeLv15

This is a masterpiece best system novel ever 😂😂😍😍😍

1yr
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DaoistlZjv6bLv2

Hey author why did you make the mc so naive and idiot in chapters 80 - 90. It makes me way too angry to read the next chapters

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