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ZerusLv152yr
2022-05-12 03:39

sorry will definitely be a really good story but the mc is the first 7 chapters all the time just crying. I just can't read any more. The mc upsets me too much.

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MiuNovelsAuthor

thank you for the review 😂 he is really whiny at the start. but after 20 chaps nd he acquired evil heart, he will change . . . and now im afraid what ill hear next is, the mc is too cold Lelz there s no in between 😂

Daoist_CultureLv15

Sprinkle some lemons on that evil heart😎...and you have a solution.

MiuNovels:thank you for the review 😂 he is really whiny at the start. but after 20 chaps nd he acquired evil heart, he will change . . . and now im afraid what ill hear next is, the mc is too cold Lelz there s no in between 😂
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Hacker_69Lv4

so I can skip all of it and just straight to chapter 20?

MiuNovels:thank you for the review 😂 he is really whiny at the start. but after 20 chaps nd he acquired evil heart, he will change . . . and now im afraid what ill hear next is, the mc is too cold Lelz there s no in between 😂
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Andrey_MLv3

yeah you can. There's actually nothing important in the first 20 chapters.

Hacker_69:so I can skip all of it and just straight to chapter 20?
matabalaoxD_2Lv13

Not to cool only other personality.

MiuNovels:thank you for the review 😂 he is really whiny at the start. but after 20 chaps nd he acquired evil heart, he will change . . . and now im afraid what ill hear next is, the mc is too cold Lelz there s no in between 😂
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