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Elyon
ElyonAuthor2yr
2022-05-01 09:12

I would like to invite all of you to take part in this brand new adventure. I'm not going to tell any of you on how good this novel is because I believe that all of you will be able to tell if its good, or not after you read it. So, come and open the pages that will become your new reading addiction.

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KEI_23
KEI_23Lv1

Wow. New work from one of the best author. i'll read it later. 😊 . your work "Reincarnated with the strongest sysystem" is so dmn good❤. Anyway is this your new work is Harem or not? thankyou

Elyon
ElyonAuthor

harem but only 4 FL this time.

KEI_23:Wow. New work from one of the best author. i'll read it later. 😊 . your work "Reincarnated with the strongest sysystem" is so dmn good❤. Anyway is this your new work is Harem or not? thankyou
Juven_Lance_Javier
Juven_Lance_JavierLv10

we'll see about that hehe

Elyon:harem but only 4 FL this time.
Elyon
ElyonAuthor

Kekeke

Juven_Lance_Javier:we'll see about that hehe
KEI_23
KEI_23Lv1

i visit ur Profile & see that ur from Philippines too. Magkababayan pala tayo ! 😁

Elyon:harem but only 4 FL this time.
KEI_23
KEI_23Lv1

ok . i like harem slightly. So gonna read it. ❤

Elyon:harem but only 4 FL this time.
Re_shin
Re_shinLv3

I love and follow the novel "Reincarnated with the strongest sysystem". But I wonder if you enjoy inflicting pain on the main character? William became a toy in the hands of the gods. Every god he met must have been slapped. Will the main character in this novel be constantly harassed?

Elyon
ElyonAuthor

Discover it as you read the story :P

Re_shin:I love and follow the novel "Reincarnated with the strongest sysystem". But I wonder if you enjoy inflicting pain on the main character? William became a toy in the hands of the gods. Every god he met must have been slapped. Will the main character in this novel be constantly harassed?
Re_shin
Re_shinLv3

I guess you like to make the readers suffer, too. What should we do, we will see the end of it, too, in pain. It will endure anything if it ends well. Please do your best.

Elyon:Discover it as you read the story :P
DarkOzz
DarkOzzLv2

Dont spoil it for us let us find out our selves

Elyon:harem but only 4 FL this time.
Code_Unknown777
Code_Unknown777Lv4

Hello elyon I recently created a story but I need an editor. I don't realy know how things work since I'm new 😯 I realy need someone who can edit.

Elyon:Discover it as you read the story :P
Elyon
ElyonAuthor

Ask your readers if they are interested to help you edit your story.

Code_Unknown777:Hello elyon I recently created a story but I need an editor. I don't realy know how things work since I'm new 😯 I realy need someone who can edit.
Code_Unknown777
Code_Unknown777Lv4

Thanks I got someone to help. one more question? where can I get a cover for my book

Elyon:Ask your readers if they are interested to help you edit your story.
MADMAN_K
MADMAN_KLv10

Question why does Lucien seams like another William I mean the cover is literally an old cover for "Reincarnated with the strongest system" just a young red head half-elf with green eyes. Also the quote in the book description about Lucien was used in "Reincarnated with the strongest system" too plus the bone dragons, undead legion and more. Is he Wills future son???

MADMAN_K
MADMAN_KLv10

The quote I'm talking about is the quote in the Prologue

MADMAN_K:Question why does Lucien seams like another William I mean the cover is literally an old cover for "Reincarnated with the strongest system" just a young red head half-elf with green eyes. Also the quote in the book description about Lucien was used in "Reincarnated with the strongest system" too plus the bone dragons, undead legion and more. Is he Wills future son???
MoonlitBlackCat
MoonlitBlackCatLv3

Would this remain independent of RWTSS or would intersect with it... If it does then I'll have to remain updated on the status of RWTSS because I temporarily shelved it at ch 1000 for consistent read later

Elyon
ElyonAuthor

it will intersect but near the end of this story

MoonlitBlackCat:Would this remain independent of RWTSS or would intersect with it... If it does then I'll have to remain updated on the status of RWTSS because I temporarily shelved it at ch 1000 for consistent read later
Anjaneya_Singh
Anjaneya_SinghLv2

can't you make a novel without harem or only with 2 girls

Elyon
ElyonAuthor

No.

Anjaneya_Singh:can't you make a novel without harem or only with 2 girls
michaelkeren
michaelkerenLv14

do you have discord server? can I join?

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TrueCritic
TrueCriticLv1

I would like to preface this review by saying I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I would definitely recommend it to someone. I just think there is a minor issue that keep it from earning a five star rating. The first issue is not one that limits the story from being rated five stars. I have read up to chapter 220 and this issue was a recent occurrence. The author stopped including the main character status page after he leaves the beginner village. I have not seen the main character’s stats or the stats of his summons for at least 30 chapters and it is a little bit frustrating. The status page was the main way that the author showed the main characters progress in the story. But, although it seems that the author is limiting the usage of the status in the soul book, it is not a dealbreaker. I can live with it. The main issue that I feel limits the story from being five stars is the interaction between the main character, female lead, and slime. Iris, the female lead, is a beast tamer. She has raised a few beasts in the past. Apparently, treating the beast like a child is the best way to raise them because that is what she does.The other reasoning the author gave for the interaction with the slime is that it is family. I understand the justification that the slime is family, not a tool or pet, but that doesn’t mean it has to be treated like a baby. when the slime is kissed on the cheek every single chapter it’s pretty annoying. Also, the slime kisses the characters on the cheek every single chapter. Obviously, I am over exaggerating. But, when reading the story it feels as if that is the case. It got on my nerves a lot when I read the story. I understand that we treat our pets in a similar manner, but it was really cringeworthy when reading. Furthermore, the slime calls the main character papa and the female lead mama which is also very annoying. I’m pretty sure this novel has an R 18 tag, and these interactions make the story seem childish. It was frustrating to read in those moments to say the least. Overall, as I said in the beginning, I would still recommend this novel. Despite the minor issues, it kept me engaged throughout the story which is not something that happens with a lot of these web novels. I would definitely give it a try and see if you like it!

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