The initial chapters are crafted with expertise showing MC's ability to think carefully and smart, as he choses the other option instead of usual baby phase to be reborn. The pace is moderate and grammar is decent, talking about the theme/genre I seriously think author knows what they are doing with it! Good luck with WSA! [~aysel]
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LIKEAfter reading it further I redact my statement, but I still can't say the mc is smart. He makes to many decisions based on this being a game and him just relaxing while playing.
TheSilentSiren:you must have stopped on chapter 2 because after that, most of the mcs ability to think went down the drain...
Welp, could be. I actually don't remember reading it qny more than 1 or 2 chapters. If I'm not wrong this was a review asked from me. đđđ¤Ł
TheSilentSiren:After reading it further I redact my statement, but I still can't say the mc is smart. He makes to many decisions based on this being a game and him just relaxing while playing.