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2023-08-23 19:28

4 chapter in, and I see sign of ntr Author intentionally create a lucky pervert moment between a potential harem member with a random guy, and the MC just treat everyone as an NPC, so he doesn't even bother about it. The guy while trying to save the girl, somehow undress her pant, and panties, got to see it all in full glory, and the MC who act like a system of the girl just laugh. This plot is completely unnecessary and to me, it a sign of the girl not gonna be in the mc harem. It feel wrong, since in the synopsis give the impression that, the mc will build a harem, base on the girl that he reincarnated. This is just 4 chapter in, so I won't consider it as much of a spoiler, just want to ask, if my gut is correct on this one?

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This is just me ranting: I don't think I wanted to read this story. To me, it feel that if the author is okay writing this kind of plot, then they might write something similar in the future. I'm too tired of being angry at a certain author that, try to justify a plot, they creates a romantic atmosphere between mc and a girl (not reach the lover point yet) only to all of a sudden pair her with another character, and write about how it bother the MC that it happen, but said that it not NTR. And continue to make the MC stay in that uncomfortable situation for a long time. Also make the MC quite pathetic. Also nowadays there is a lot of author that write a pathetic MC. And hate it when other call them beta, at this point, being call beta fit what those type of MC personality very much. Again, I barely finish 4 chapter, but my traumatize brain from all those semi ntr make me too sensitive to read this. Sorry to the author if you didn't intent for this to be semi ntr.

raizell24
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thanks for the save bro i too don't like this s**t

Veasna_TDM:This is just me ranting: I don't think I wanted to read this story. To me, it feel that if the author is okay writing this kind of plot, then they might write something similar in the future. I'm too tired of being angry at a certain author that, try to justify a plot, they creates a romantic atmosphere between mc and a girl (not reach the lover point yet) only to all of a sudden pair her with another character, and write about how it bother the MC that it happen, but said that it not NTR. And continue to make the MC stay in that uncomfortable situation for a long time. Also make the MC quite pathetic. Also nowadays there is a lot of author that write a pathetic MC. And hate it when other call them beta, at this point, being call beta fit what those type of MC personality very much. Again, I barely finish 4 chapter, but my traumatize brain from all those semi ntr make me too sensitive to read this. Sorry to the author if you didn't intent for this to be semi ntr.
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