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The story has a terrible sense of progression. its chapter fifty and the protagonist haven't completed a single mission given by the system....waste of my time
Re: World Apocalypse
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Firstly, thanks for the review. Glad to know that you read all fifty chapters available. Now, in my defense, the MC completed the side mission given by the system. The Main mission would take time for him to complete and the Daily mission can't be done at the moment since he doesn't have permission to work with Exo Suits. Also, nothing that has happened so far is filler. Trials, tests, meeting characters, none of that is filler. You may think the story is slow but I can assure you it's not. Maybe you can stick around and wait till it clocks a 100 chapters then you can come back and binge through to understand what I'm saying.
89thBAMM:the system feels like a foot not and the plot has no pacing 90% of the story feels like filler how do you have a filler chapter in the first 10đ©
I'll check back in after 20 more chapters drop. Constructive criticism watch The Closer Look and Literature Devils on YouTube and find out how to write a story.
R_F_T_S:Firstly, thanks for the review. Glad to know that you read all fifty chapters available. Now, in my defense, the MC completed the side mission given by the system. The Main mission would take time for him to complete and the Daily mission can't be done at the moment since he doesn't have permission to work with Exo Suits. Also, nothing that has happened so far is filler. Trials, tests, meeting characters, none of that is filler. You may think the story is slow but I can assure you it's not. Maybe you can stick around and wait till it clocks a 100 chapters then you can come back and binge through to understand what I'm saying.
89thBAMM:I'll check back in after 20 more chapters drop. Constructive criticism watch The Closer Look and Literature Devils on YouTube and find out how to write a story.
89thBAMM:I'll check back in after 20 more chapters drop. Constructive criticism watch The Closer Look and Literature Devils on YouTube and find out how to write a story.