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89thBAMM

89thBAMM

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A very picky reader......

2020-05-29 JoinedGlobal
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM11mth
    Commented

    no racism going on here 😑

    Ch 3 The Origin of the Female Ghost, The Road to Civil and Martial Arts
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    What If I Can't Die?
    Eastern ¡ Infinite Sand
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Replied to Psan

    honestly your review is still too high I'd give it a 1* but at this point IDC. throw it the 🗑️

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    Reincarnated with an Analysis system.
    Fantasy ¡ Kirito_K5
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    sometimes I can't feel like this is being written by a neglected 14yr old... but I'm in too deep now...🤢

    Ch 73 Consequences And A Gamble
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    I Am The Game's Villain
    Fantasy ¡ NihilRuler
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Replied to qsdfh

    although you're right about the tediousness of reading their story and the first 100 chapters being unbearably slow. The characters and perspectives of everyone required in order to understand the motives and the growth of the main character. I still think the author could have done a better job.

    Ch 100 Misty Trickster
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    Trickster: The Apostle of Loki
    Fantasy ¡ Antenz
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Posted

    complete and utter garbage. It's a waste of time to read

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    I will ignore my storyline.
    Games ¡ Stylish_Demon
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    this one felt forced

    Ch 82 Together...We Will Do What Is Necessary
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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy ¡ Resurgent
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    trust me I like the whole bit with the side characters it makes things feel more real especially if they have differing motivations

    Ch 30 Amelia meeting the twins
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    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy ¡ Raos_IOI
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    please more

    Ch 3 Chapter 3 : A small talk and the weight of Duty (1)
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    In an visual novel where I'm the servant of the Vampire Villainess.
    Fantasy ¡ SK_YUNJUN
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    stay consistent and keep writing. I like where your story's going so far

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Reminder that "you should mind your business" [Edited]
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    In an visual novel where I'm the servant of the Vampire Villainess.
    Fantasy ¡ SK_YUNJUN
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    I'm hooked

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Waking up to an new world [Edited]
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    In an visual novel where I'm the servant of the Vampire Villainess.
    Fantasy ¡ SK_YUNJUN
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Replied to Resurgent

    Maybe you could explore both perspectives

    Ch 45 He's Watching Us
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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy ¡ Resurgent
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    Things are getting spicy. Never thought I'd like the drama genre so much until you started writing but you're pulling it off quite well.

    Ch 45 He's Watching Us
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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy ¡ Resurgent
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    what about the egg

    Ch 45 Chapter 45: Betrayal V
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    I Became the Villain
    Fantasy ¡ GeneralAverage
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    just repeating your words when he signed that deal

    Ch 17 Coo-coo
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    A Villain's Guide to World Domination
    Fantasy ¡ Arrc_
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    use Grammarly

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    Hidden Boss: The Author Become Mob
    Fantasy ¡ LuciFirst_05
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    it's crazy how keeping alive something your father put blood sweat and tears into is tantamount to a petty reason..... or maybe I'm just a petty person

    It was not because of some petty reasons like father's legacy or something; it was because of the usefulness of something like this. The cash flow was one thing. The man power was another thing. He could control pretty much anything with a Rank S guild. He was going to build this guild as his base. A fortress. A fortress that will protect him from any shitty storms.
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    Hero: Regressed with villain system
    Fantasy ¡ Eternal_Ruler_
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    What Does “Jealous” Mean? To feel jealous means “to feel threatened, insecure, or protective of something you already have (especially in a romantic sense).”  Whereas envy requires two parties, jealousy requires three. For example, you might feel jealous of your best friend’s new friend because you feel as if you might get replaced. What Does “Envy” Mean? Envy is the longing to have what someone else has, whether it be attributes or possessions. Envy requires only two parties—you and someone else. For example, you may envy another student because they got a good grade on the exam, but you didn’t.

    Ch 15 The Truth
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    Hero: Regressed with villain system
    Fantasy ¡ Eternal_Ruler_
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    What Does “Jealous” Mean? To feel jealous means “to feel threatened, insecure, or protective of something you already have (especially in a romantic sense).”  Whereas envy requires two parties, jealousy requires three. For example, you might feel jealous of your best friend’s new friend because you feel as if you might get replaced. What Does “Envy” Mean? Envy is the longing to have what someone else has, whether it be attributes or possessions. Envy requires only two parties—you and someone else. For example, you may envy another student because they got a good grade on the exam, but you didn’t.

    It was later, after Leviathan slew the wolf, she realized that what she was feeling was not, in fact, admiration but jealousy. Yes, clear jealousy bud from the depths of her heart because of her inferiority complex to the white-haired brat. How can she, who was an elite, be powerless in front of a no-name guy like him? She knew most of the elite students, but she never has seen or heard about him anywhere. For someone like a no-name to come to her rescue was beneath her.
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    Hero: Regressed with villain system
    Fantasy ¡ Eternal_Ruler_
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Commented

    the dialog with the system is trash please for the sake of your story stop it

    Ch 6 Start of the main path
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    Hero: Regressed with villain system
    Fantasy ¡ Eternal_Ruler_
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  • 89thBAMM
    89thBAMM1yr
    Replied to 89thBAMM

    just a trend I'm noticing after the protagonist gets a gold finger, his balls turn to steel

    Ch 17 Coo-coo
    altalt
    A Villain's Guide to World Domination
    Fantasy ¡ Arrc_
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