The story’s plot is stagnant. The author keeps repeating the same actions from the end of one chapter until the beginning of the next. A third of the story keeps getting repeated. The action is slow to develop and t]he main character hasn’t even gotten close to really starting his main mission. Feeling a little cheated reading a story I had high hopes for
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LIKEWhy does each paragraph keep repeating the characters name and the fact that they are the strongest cadet and the leader of the group? Is this just for filler or to engrave her entire resume into our minds?
Honestly, I want to apologize to you and every person that has spent money on my work. I stopped writing this work like two months ago but had to keep on updating coz of the contract requirements. My inspiration got a massive hit and I was questioning why I bothered to write a story that couldn't even get good enough promotion. You don't know how painful it is to know that it's only one person reading my work out of so many thousands on this app. But that's not your fault and I sincerely apologize for making you waste your money regardless. If there was a way to refund you, I would have done so. I hope my work doesn't ruin your desire to read books coz there are several good books on this platform. This is going to be my last work here as I'd need to take a step back to understand why I haven't been able to make a statement so far on the platform and as a writer in general. Once again I apologize and if you want, I can recommend some better novels that won't waste your time, just depends on your taste.
