I don't want to encourage other to not read this as it is a good, quality novel but there were some things that personally bothered me. I just wish the author put more thought into the background and beginning development of the character, even just a little uniqueness would have improved the quality alot. Like father left, mother in a comma, and dungeons all over the world. I get it works but try to have a little spin. The MC is also just Arifureta but with spacial abilities, white hair, loses a arm, eats monsters and gets lightning affinity is literally an exact copy. One last thing is I don't understand was how it took him 6 years to find out seemingly obvious things about his ability and how he wasn't able to get his class in this time when he had no trouble killings beast as soon as he gets stranded. Otherwise I like the development, just pointing out some flaws so any future novels are even better. :)
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His lack of development for 6 years before the start of the story can mainly be summed up to a lack of opportunity. Rather than desperately trying for 6 years, he spent at most half of that time genuinely trying to level up and after that forgot about it/gave up. He spent all his time working instead so that he could live relatively normally and support his mother at the same time. Aside from that, his Void Physique played a large part in limiting his development. Since it prevented him from gaining a stronger body, he couldn’t use his skills often unless he wanted to literally be torn apart. It wasn’t that his skills were weak, but that he genuinely couldn’t use them much even if he wanted to. He was never in any life or death situations until that point, so he really had no need to try as hard as he could without caring for the injuries he would sustain in the process. Instead, he knew that if he got injured it’d just be more money wasted on hospital bills and less time he could spend working to maintain his lifestyle. (He has his low-level regeneration but that kind of skill wouldn’t be able to heal truly grave injuries, only lighter wounds.) As for why it all changed after he was pushed into the dungeon, that also relates back to the previous points. Unlike before, he was forced to constantly fight and improve no matter the cost, or else it meant death. It could be considered that his fall was an outlet for his talent to bloom, since he could no longer focus on anything but preserving his own life and escaping. Until he mutated, he was running on constant adrenaline rushes and mana alone, and his mind was still chaotic from the sudden turn of events, so he didn’t really process things logically like he would have when he still had other stuff to worry about. Well, there’s probably more I could say but after this much it should be easier to get the gist of the situation. I hope this helped clear some of your doubts! Ps. I didn’t really put much importance on earth when I started writing this, so I can definitely understand that the setting is a bit overrated. I just couldn’t think of a better way to start the story since most of the stuff introduced in the beginning besides some of the characters and his mom would become irrelevant in the future. I’ll consider rewriting the first few chaps in the future though. Pps. His hair is black not white lol
thanks bro, im not into in edgy arifureta rip offs the original is to much already
So he just never returns to his world? He just disappeared and thats it? I was expecting something closer to Solo Leveling
Crocs_is_Dead:His lack of development for 6 years before the start of the story can mainly be summed up to a lack of opportunity. Rather than desperately trying for 6 years, he spent at most half of that time genuinely trying to level up and after that forgot about it/gave up. He spent all his time working instead so that he could live relatively normally and support his mother at the same time. Aside from that, his Void Physique played a large part in limiting his development. Since it prevented him from gaining a stronger body, he couldn’t use his skills often unless he wanted to literally be torn apart. It wasn’t that his skills were weak, but that he genuinely couldn’t use them much even if he wanted to. He was never in any life or death situations until that point, so he really had no need to try as hard as he could without caring for the injuries he would sustain in the process. Instead, he knew that if he got injured it’d just be more money wasted on hospital bills and less time he could spend working to maintain his lifestyle. (He has his low-level regeneration but that kind of skill wouldn’t be able to heal truly grave injuries, only lighter wounds.) As for why it all changed after he was pushed into the dungeon, that also relates back to the previous points. Unlike before, he was forced to constantly fight and improve no matter the cost, or else it meant death. It could be considered that his fall was an outlet for his talent to bloom, since he could no longer focus on anything but preserving his own life and escaping. Until he mutated, he was running on constant adrenaline rushes and mana alone, and his mind was still chaotic from the sudden turn of events, so he didn’t really process things logically like he would have when he still had other stuff to worry about. Well, there’s probably more I could say but after this much it should be easier to get the gist of the situation. I hope this helped clear some of your doubts! Ps. I didn’t really put much importance on earth when I started writing this, so I can definitely understand that the setting is a bit overrated. I just couldn’t think of a better way to start the story since most of the stuff introduced in the beginning besides some of the characters and his mom would become irrelevant in the future. I’ll consider rewriting the first few chaps in the future though. Pps. His hair is black not white lol
you know this review truly helped or else I would have dropped
Crocs_is_Dead:His lack of development for 6 years before the start of the story can mainly be summed up to a lack of opportunity. Rather than desperately trying for 6 years, he spent at most half of that time genuinely trying to level up and after that forgot about it/gave up. He spent all his time working instead so that he could live relatively normally and support his mother at the same time. Aside from that, his Void Physique played a large part in limiting his development. Since it prevented him from gaining a stronger body, he couldn’t use his skills often unless he wanted to literally be torn apart. It wasn’t that his skills were weak, but that he genuinely couldn’t use them much even if he wanted to. He was never in any life or death situations until that point, so he really had no need to try as hard as he could without caring for the injuries he would sustain in the process. Instead, he knew that if he got injured it’d just be more money wasted on hospital bills and less time he could spend working to maintain his lifestyle. (He has his low-level regeneration but that kind of skill wouldn’t be able to heal truly grave injuries, only lighter wounds.) As for why it all changed after he was pushed into the dungeon, that also relates back to the previous points. Unlike before, he was forced to constantly fight and improve no matter the cost, or else it meant death. It could be considered that his fall was an outlet for his talent to bloom, since he could no longer focus on anything but preserving his own life and escaping. Until he mutated, he was running on constant adrenaline rushes and mana alone, and his mind was still chaotic from the sudden turn of events, so he didn’t really process things logically like he would have when he still had other stuff to worry about. Well, there’s probably more I could say but after this much it should be easier to get the gist of the situation. I hope this helped clear some of your doubts! Ps. I didn’t really put much importance on earth when I started writing this, so I can definitely understand that the setting is a bit overrated. I just couldn’t think of a better way to start the story since most of the stuff introduced in the beginning besides some of the characters and his mom would become irrelevant in the future. I’ll consider rewriting the first few chaps in the future though. Pps. His hair is black not white lol
you really should since it probably costs you many readers cause all they see is a solo leveling rip off with an mc that seemingly was just to lazy to develop his potential
Crocs_is_Dead:His lack of development for 6 years before the start of the story can mainly be summed up to a lack of opportunity. Rather than desperately trying for 6 years, he spent at most half of that time genuinely trying to level up and after that forgot about it/gave up. He spent all his time working instead so that he could live relatively normally and support his mother at the same time. Aside from that, his Void Physique played a large part in limiting his development. Since it prevented him from gaining a stronger body, he couldn’t use his skills often unless he wanted to literally be torn apart. It wasn’t that his skills were weak, but that he genuinely couldn’t use them much even if he wanted to. He was never in any life or death situations until that point, so he really had no need to try as hard as he could without caring for the injuries he would sustain in the process. Instead, he knew that if he got injured it’d just be more money wasted on hospital bills and less time he could spend working to maintain his lifestyle. (He has his low-level regeneration but that kind of skill wouldn’t be able to heal truly grave injuries, only lighter wounds.) As for why it all changed after he was pushed into the dungeon, that also relates back to the previous points. Unlike before, he was forced to constantly fight and improve no matter the cost, or else it meant death. It could be considered that his fall was an outlet for his talent to bloom, since he could no longer focus on anything but preserving his own life and escaping. Until he mutated, he was running on constant adrenaline rushes and mana alone, and his mind was still chaotic from the sudden turn of events, so he didn’t really process things logically like he would have when he still had other stuff to worry about. Well, there’s probably more I could say but after this much it should be easier to get the gist of the situation. I hope this helped clear some of your doubts! Ps. I didn’t really put much importance on earth when I started writing this, so I can definitely understand that the setting is a bit overrated. I just couldn’t think of a better way to start the story since most of the stuff introduced in the beginning besides some of the characters and his mom would become irrelevant in the future. I’ll consider rewriting the first few chaps in the future though. Pps. His hair is black not white lol
This is what i look for in a review, good genuine criticism and the author even gave his valid thought process. Ima read it
