Review Detail of FunnyBuns in Void Evolution System
Review detail
So overall it is really good, it had a few issues with NTR but the author fixed that up. My only complaint is why he had to be so zealous about defending the NTR and making countless bogus excuses instead of just getting rid of it. Just take it as a precautionary warning.
Void Evolution System
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It didn't go far and it isn't there anymore, it stopped at the first heroine allowing another man to intimately caress her face. The author got rid of that part though.
Melshan:Is the MC cheated on by his woman?
FunnyBuns:It didn't go far and it isn't there anymore, it stopped at the first heroine allowing another man to intimately caress her face. The author got rid of that part though.
Ah yes it was forced, because a second generation young master who leveled up due to daddy's money is capable of forcing himself on someone who leveled up by risking their life in dungeons almost 24/7 for over a year despite being 15 levels lower than her. Please be realistic, such a thing never would have happened if she wasn't willing.
aigotcha:Don’t lie, it was forced and she chopped his pp off right after 💀
I mean forced as in he’s a second gen young master, SHE WAS AFRAID OF HIS FAMILY AND WHAT THEY COULD DO TO MC but then he crossed the limit and yk what happened
FunnyBuns:Ah yes it was forced, because a second generation young master who leveled up due to daddy's money is capable of forcing himself on someone who leveled up by risking their life in dungeons almost 24/7 for over a year despite being 15 levels lower than her. Please be realistic, such a thing never would have happened if she wasn't willing.
Again that is false, she never feared him or his family and even goes as far as stating such later in the chapter.
aigotcha:I mean forced as in he’s a second gen young master, SHE WAS AFRAID OF HIS FAMILY AND WHAT THEY COULD DO TO MC but then he crossed the limit and yk what happened
FunnyBuns:Again that is false, she never feared him or his family and even goes as far as stating such later in the chapter.
ya it was forced. but still he still disguised the ntr with this scene. lot of hints were already there in chapter that it's gonna happen.
aigotcha:I mean forced as in he’s a second gen young master, SHE WAS AFRAID OF HIS FAMILY AND WHAT THEY COULD DO TO MC but then he crossed the limit and yk what happened
I stopped a few chapters after that happened so IDK if it happened again. Honestly it is a gamble as even if it has yet to happen again now doesn't mean it won't in the future. Overall it is pretty well written so it might be worth the risk, but personally once I encounter something like that I have a tendency to drop it even if the author fixes it.
Krypton71:So is there NTR or not upto the latest ch??
Don't bother, lol this particular reader is just a dissatisfied soul like another one we authors know. They always complain about any kind of touching attention female gives to other men, be it even a handshake or a pat over back.
aigotcha:I mean forced as in he’s a second gen young master, SHE WAS AFRAID OF HIS FAMILY AND WHAT THEY COULD DO TO MC but then he crossed the limit and yk what happened
Coming from the guy known for writing NTR like a heroine kissing another man your words hold no value in this case.
BrewingFantasies:Don't bother, lol this particular reader is just a dissatisfied soul like another one we authors know. They always complain about any kind of touching attention female gives to other men, be it even a handshake or a pat over back.
Seriously though the fact that you of all people would say such a thing is extremely ironic and shameless.
BrewingFantasies:Don't bother, lol this particular reader is just a dissatisfied soul like another one we authors know. They always complain about any kind of touching attention female gives to other men, be it even a handshake or a pat over back.
Actually holy frigg looks like you even deleted your own review where you were called out by multiple people for writing NTR. Seeing as I was one of the main people that called you out I can only imagine you're just salty and taking it out by slandering me. This stuff happened months ago get over it, I completely forgot about something so unimportant and you should too.
BrewingFantasies:Don't bother, lol this particular reader is just a dissatisfied soul like another one we authors know. They always complain about any kind of touching attention female gives to other men, be it even a handshake or a pat over back.
Your comment got deleted but you know full well what I mean, even if you forget it doesn't mean you will never remember it.
BrewingFantasies:Don't bother, lol this particular reader is just a dissatisfied soul like another one we authors know. They always complain about any kind of touching attention female gives to other men, be it even a handshake or a pat over back.
You are pathetic. You would probably think that if another man breathed in the direction of FL it is NTR. This novel doesn't have NTR, or anything that even implies to that direction, you are just pathetic
FunnyBuns:Your comment got deleted but you know full well what I mean, even if you forget it doesn't mean you will never remember it.
BrewingFantasies:Don't bother, lol this particular reader is just a dissatisfied soul like another one we authors know. They always complain about any kind of touching attention female gives to other men, be it even a handshake or a pat over back.
So the other guy asked you to come right? Seriously a bunch of wimps banding together and licking each others wounds.
Alekzi:You are pathetic. You would probably think that if another man breathed in the direction of FL it is NTR. This novel doesn't have NTR, or anything that even implies to that direction, you are just pathetic