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mrant12
mrant12Lv122yr
2022-05-05 09:11

Interesting start, very well done! Can't wait to read more chapters, keep up the very good work and all the very best for WSA 2022 hope you do well :)

Last Shelter Online

Sabet_Saga
4.7
292 Chs

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Sabet_Saga
Sabet_SagaAuthor

Thank you very much for reading🥹. I really appreciate it.

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Sabet_Saga
Sabet_SagaAuthor

Hi! I am the author of this novel. Firstly, I really want to scream because I am so excited to finally released this novel! Yeay! *Hand Clapping for myself*. My name is Sabet, I am a female author who loves to play online game (too much). So that will be the main reason why I want to write a Game Novel, and boom! here we got LAST SHELTER ONLINE. My nationality is Indonesia, but currently I am active as a college student in number one Engineering Campus in Thailand. Yes, I got scholarship! But sadly, I can not graduate on time due to COVID-19 pandemic. And the bad news is, my scholarship will be run out soon. So I need to work hard to pay my study and my life in abroad (I can feel the MC here). I wish that my novel can be loved and enjoyed by everyone, I wish that I can win this biggest competition of WSA 2022. In order to do that, your support is very important to me. Best Wishes, Sabet_Saga.

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Avan
AvanLv14

One of the best game stories in webnovel that gives me the SAO vibe. It was beautifully written with several layers of mystery that made me keep guessing and ask for more. It's written by a talented young author who really did her best to write, find an editor, commission cover, etc. Let's support this author and hope for the best. Well Done Author

2yr
Raj_Shah_7152
Raj_Shah_7152Lv15

A fresh take on an overly explored VRMMO genre . Very little information about the world as of now , but I'm sure that it will be very interesting . ( Review at chapter 17 ) Positives : 1) Solid grammar 2) Interesting world premise 3) No dumb clichès Hopefully the author shifts gears and zooms into a super story 😄😄

2yr
Drew_Paroz
Drew_ParozLv2

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Missrealitybites
MissrealitybitesLv14

I read the early chapters of this novel a month ago and immediately drawn in. The premise is very promising as it explores humans desire for a second chance after life for their loved ones and themselves. I am so happy Sabet has finally published the story here on Webnovel. I can't wait to keep reading more. Writing quality = 5 stars. For a newbie author, this is very impressive. Story development = 5 stars so far. I've read all available chapters and really like how it's progressing. We get information on the game slowly but in a good pace with enough mystery to keep us guessing. Good flow and pacing. Character design = 5 stars for now. Only saw a few characters so far but they are well thought lot and relatable. Updating stability = 5 stars. One chapter per day now, though I predict it's going to be more once the book is contracted. World background = solid five stars for the one I've seen so far. Can't wait to read more.

2yr
JayFireblood
JayFirebloodLv15

Of writing this I'm at chapter 110 so far I'm enjoying the series but there's a few problems with the book. For starters is it's hard to tell if they really playing a game, people don't say the right things and finally their isn't a base of the game to give us a idea what is and what isn't capable

2yr
RaizarP
RaizarPLv11

I like this fiction so far. It's solid. Character development is decent, story development is decent. I really think that this is a good foundation for continuing forward. Importantly, the main character stands out as vibrant and interesting. First, the narrative is ok. It follows a straight line of progress and in the first 10k written it did not deviate. Second, since it is a system-based world, expect the blue window and a lot of notification. I am looking forward to how the story pans out.

2yr
Ogi_Saga
Ogi_SagaLv11

WORTH TO ADD! I give five stars for this story because this story deserves it. At the beginning of the story, Hiro appears as an annoying little brother and I hate him but I also like him 😭 The author managed to make the characters very well that's why i like this story. I also really like the world background, reminds me of Sao, by Reki Kawahara. love it 100%

2yr
Chocolo
ChocoloLv3

This novel has a good plot development and every chara is pretty interesting. It is easy to read and catch up to, so refreshing; nice to fill the free time. But one thing that misses in this novel... why u didn't put a "comedy" tag, author? I laugh several times srsly hahaha LIBE IS SO CUTE AND HER ACTION TO HIRO KILLS ME 🤣🤣

2yr
Thesilverderp
ThesilverderpLv13

Is it harem or no? B--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------->

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