Review Detail of Bean_Dude in Odyssey of the Blind God

I was really hopeful for this novel just based on the concept and it isn't the worst novel I've read but the writing quality leaves much to be desired. It just feels clunky. The word choice often feels weird and there are run on sentences in every chapter. Another problem I have is that everything feels way to coincidental. Like it's pretty normal for things to fall into an MC's lap but usually there's an explanation for why that's happening. Not in this novel. There are way too many unexplained coincidences and they make the story feel like it wasn't really planned out at all. Overall it's readable but I wouldn't expect anything too good from this.