The translation is the opposite of "pretty good" but other than that I agree.

I was really hopeful for this novel just based on the concept and it isn't the worst novel I've read but the writing quality leaves much to be desired. It just feels clunky. The word choice often feels weird and there are run on sentences in every chapter. Another problem I have is that everything feels way to coincidental. Like it's pretty normal for things to fall into an MC's lap but usually there's an explanation for why that's happening. Not in this novel. There are way too many unexplained coincidences and they make the story feel like it wasn't really planned out at all. Overall it's readable but I wouldn't expect anything too good from this.

That technique doesn't have anything to do with flying swords though. He's the one creating the sword shadows so it's still considered his strength. And even if he was using a flying sword it would be pointless if he didn't have any technique.

his lightning is

Nope, ISSTH reference.

If a weak guy and a strong guy both get shot in the head of course the results are going to be different. The health bar doesn't have anything to do with it. Health bars are only there to quantify a persons strength. Everyone in this novel has a health bar. And sure he gave some examples of novels he thinks are better than this but I find it incredibly amusing that they would say that The Strongest System is good. That novel has even more problems than this one does.

It's a good novel but all of the mistakes are making it hard for me to read. If you don't mind spelling and grammar mistakes then this is a good read.

*5000

Please use your common sense. Of course he's gonna put points into AGI for a chance to catch the strongest pet in the game. Who wouldn't?

There's only one of them so "Midnight Phantom's" is correct.

Animist: a person who believes all natural things, such as plants, animals, rocks, and thunder, have spirits and can influence human events. Probably uses the power of nature to do cool things

Yeah, something's up with this cultivation technique.

You said in your review that there wouldn't be any obvious mistakes so why are there so many in every chapter?

Awespec I love all of your novels and I'm reading all of them right now. This novel is really good but why is it that the writing quality continues to drop as the novel goes on? I've noticed this in all of your books. There are spelling and grammar issues several times in each chapter. You spell something right one sentence and then a few sentences later it's wrong. This wouldn't be much of a problem if this was it but some of the sentences make no sense at all.

I don't think pare is the word you should be using here. Do you mean parry?

Around what chapter does he recover his cultivation?

entities -> entity's Isn't this like your third book? How are you still making mistakes like this?

Rock Johnson the Dwayne

Why do you keep writing "doa" instead of "dao"? At this point I cant tell if it's intentional or not.

Void Fimerment Realm should probably be Void Firmament Realm. Fimerment is not a word but it's written in every chapter that mentions that rank.