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Bad_Thiliono
Bad_ThilionoLv152yr
2022-09-15 02:35

Uhh its not good and the only reason im posting this is because if the author thinks that this novel is worth 10-18 credits a chapter that is just absurd. Basic grammar errors and very basic and easily proofread mistakes is not worth anyones well earned paycheck. The story does not suspend my disbelief. The story also falls to the same “i have lived for thousands of years but im gonna act mentally defecient even though im supposed to be very old and wise” trap that usually is more common place in cultivation novels. Pro tip to the author your characters will never be more intelligent then you so try to find a way to “trick” or give the “illusion” of intelligence to your characters dont say they are intellegent or have other people react to basic problem solving in awe or make everyone else incapable of basic deduction its just off putting.

The Accidental Vampire

Demonic_angel
4.0
258 Chs

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XIETIAN
XIETIANLv15

The big daddy gifted you a castle so you'd better take the gold this time. In next year's competition you won't have a chance after all since I will be taking part

2yr

Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthor

First review from the author. Story development and world background: A story involving many myths and legends, including Vampires, Werewolves and much more. The story is about a boy's journey in a world of legends while occupying the body of one of the Four Ancestral Vampires. The story revolves around Atlas and his quest to reclaim what he had lost. A journey which brings him at the forefront of the legends he only used to hear about. The story will have mystery, action, adventure and much more to keep you engaged and waiting for the next chapters. Character: Atlas used to be an ordinary boy who had smartness but lacked the strrength and the courage. With the sudden change in his life, he walks in a journey to reinvent himself. Update Stability: Daily release. Please give the book a try and see for yourself.

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prada_murthy
prada_murthyLv13

Okay!! From where do I start? First of all, thank you author for such an amazing book. A boy who loathes the vampire race ends up in a vampire's body and that too one of the strongest vampires. Hmm, interesting!! Now that Atlas has become a vampire, it is his turn to show who is in power. Come on, bring in the revenge. The writing quality is great and the story proceeds smoothly, although at times it does become a little confusing. But that's fine. And certainly, one of the many things the author is great at updating regularly. The story is filled with action, emotions and of course, mystery. The story is intriguing and although there are 20 odd chapters currently, it is enough to keep the readers hooked and curious to find out what happens next. Some of the scenes are so vividly described that it is easy to visualize them. Now, all that remains to see is how the story proceeds and what kind of character Atlas will turn into. Kudos to the author for such an awesome story and all the best!!!!

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kumar_vishwas
kumar_vishwasLv14

pathetic boring novel.🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤞🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

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Ashutosh_Parmar_8716
Ashutosh_Parmar_8716Lv1

i just dropped it after his sister died 😭 i am week hearted. actually i was looking forward to some siblings bond after reading first few chapters but the author had just outright kill her, i am disappointed, why build a character if you are going to kill them.

2yr
Dretno
DretnoLv3

As is the story isn't bad enough, the author decided to add HAREM AND ROMANCE into the mix.............. I personally hate romance and harem so I can't be too cruel with the review.

2yr
Fixten
FixtenLv14

The story is about a boy, who is trashed by the vampires, become a vampire himself. And obviously, he's going to start his revenge. I hope that the author can add some mysterious elements in the future. If you are a casual revenge story fan, this novel would be enjoyable for you.

2yr
lbis
lbisLv15

Alright in all honesty the book is okay, but the mc is so unbelievably insufferable that it’s truly hard to deal with. Writing the review at chapter 49. Really hoping it gets better.

2yr
_Frost_
_Frost_Lv13

Read up to chapter 50, doing a review now because not sure if I'm going to continue or not. The first 10 chapters I thought were doing well was kind of unique and interesting. But after the Mc ended up in the progenitor body story up to this point has just been kinda boring. Mc is very impulsive and niave but with his age and inexperienced it's a classic trope when novels start with a young normal Mc. Think the main reason I'm not really into the story has to do with the focus now being on setting up the introduction to the characters of the story and a bit of plot development but so far there hasn't been any real moments with the characters that's made me interested or care about them. Guess it's kinda my fault I did come into this expecting more of a b*d*ss Mc due to seeing him being a vampire progenitor in the description. Also not sure if something like Google translate is being used to translate the story or just simple mistakes but there is issues with the writing with he and she being mixed up often and other details. If the novel does end up to your liking one thing is commendable to point out is the author is releasing chapters at a rate you don't see with many novels so you'll have something to read each day.

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