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GRANDMAESTA_30
GRANDMAESTA_30Lv142yr
2022-05-24 19:10

I just don't understand why it's ratings just dropped suddenly. Is it because he revealed the world is a comic book? Come on, you got Batman there, of course he is going to ask Martian manhunter to read his mind sooner or later. Reason, appeared out of nowhere and powered himself to the avatar state after receiving a severe injury, destroying the whole place. THAT IS BATMAN. PARANIOA, INTELLIGENCE AND WISDOM IN ONE BEING. It is a good fic and keeps improving.

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Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv13

Not everyone likes to let the fictional characters know that They are fictional, even mc from oTher fanfiction do not like revealing what advantage they have in that world.

Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv13

The mc will Lose his Uniqueness and advantage, now that everyone knows where he is from.

GRANDMAESTA_30
GRANDMAESTA_30Lv14

Bro, I understand your point, but what was he going to do? The system didn't give him any mind protection. And in that situation under the questioning of the Justice League, sooner or later they were going to know the inconsistencies of his explanation. And Batman, MR PARANOIA, you know what I mean, the truth was going to come out later. So better the truth came from him earlier to earn some brownie points with bats. Even, if arguing he came out of the questioning successfully with the Justice League, he needed to practice his mind defense with a psychic like Martian Manhunter. So you get the drift. But I think it was intentional on the part of the author to put the Mc in that situation, he could have landed the Mc in a secluded place.

Daoist423242:Not everyone likes to let the fictional characters know that They are fictional, even mc from oTher fanfiction do not like revealing what advantage they have in that world.
Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv13

But still they will never imagined themselves being a comic characters right? Even if the mc knows what happen because of having read comics they will never come Up with explanation that maybe he is from a world with Them being only a comIc characters cause that would absurd even For batman, so no Letting them know that they are comic characters Is like taking away the uniqueness of mc, And also his advantage and letting them know that he has a system is one of The hatest thing in fanfiction. Why does it matters if batman is paranoid? The mc has a system Which makes him Powerful and Mc with knowing all Of them knows their weakNess but now It Is Shared by others so yes he lost the advantage.

Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv13

The author should add that the aMbassador of god Cannot be influence with any related with mind cause if the mc is easily being Mind read then he Will be Easily mind control so yeah I think if i were the gods who made him aMbassador i would never make mc be Easily taken control or being mind read cause he is important.

GRANDMAESTA_30:Bro, I understand your point, but what was he going to do? The system didn't give him any mind protection. And in that situation under the questioning of the Justice League, sooner or later they were going to know the inconsistencies of his explanation. And Batman, MR PARANOIA, you know what I mean, the truth was going to come out later. So better the truth came from him earlier to earn some brownie points with bats. Even, if arguing he came out of the questioning successfully with the Justice League, he needed to practice his mind defense with a psychic like Martian Manhunter. So you get the drift. But I think it was intentional on the part of the author to put the Mc in that situation, he could have landed the Mc in a secluded place.
Zukel
ZukelLv4

Guys please remember that even though he read the comic books of justice league/young justice. You have to remember that it a New life now so, is can be very real, and carrying such knowledge is very hard if you are trying to survive.

ALEX1402
ALEX1402Lv4

This I agree. Many comic characters have not taken being in a comic book well, it has driven most of them to madness. Still some versions of dc heroes have knowledge about them being comic characters and existence of our earth in their multiverse, where dc comics exist. Still them knowing about his future knowledge takes away the SI feel. Since then it just becomes a normal dc fanfic where they have a character who time travelled or can see future.

Daoist423242:Not everyone likes to let the fictional characters know that They are fictional, even mc from oTher fanfiction do not like revealing what advantage they have in that world.
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It's a very good fanfic, the beginning wasn't the best, but with each chapter i feel the novel evolving, the system is "smooth", it's not unpleasant at all like most systems novels on this site, the MC's personality is relatively original, i feel like most of the MCs on this site are relatively similar so it's refreshing (to me) to read about a different mc, i hope that just like the story he will also evolve as a person. His relationship with other characters hasn't been very developed yet, but it seems to be going down an interesting path, not too forced and not ignored, although there aren't many interactions yet i feel that everything is going in an ideal way, it's "smooth "... I hope the author doesn't add more powers to the MC, i see some people complaining that he is weak and having the avatar powers is no big deal, but i believe that he can do amazing things with this power, especially if the level of power of the elements is greater than in Avatar (the anime), i imagine him being able to cause devastating earthquakes, summoning giant meteors (like madara), shooting lightning so powerful that Thor would be jealous, creating tsunamis of hundreds of meters, hurricanes so powerful that they can destroy entire cities, or even creating a new ice age! Okay, i got a little excited here, but what I mean is that the possibilities are endless, his power is fantastic and it will be amazing to read about his development. I love the DC universe, unfortunately there aren't so many fanfics about it and this is one that I'm most excited about it's future, i really hope that the author doesn't drop this novel, i'll be rooting for it. PS: MCxSupergirl (make it happen!)

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