I just don't understand why it's ratings just dropped suddenly. Is it because he revealed the world is a comic book? Come on, you got Batman there, of course he is going to ask Martian manhunter to read his mind sooner or later. Reason, appeared out of nowhere and powered himself to the avatar state after receiving a severe injury, destroying the whole place. THAT IS BATMAN. PARANIOA, INTELLIGENCE AND WISDOM IN ONE BEING. It is a good fic and keeps improving.
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LIKEBro, I understand your point, but what was he going to do? The system didn't give him any mind protection. And in that situation under the questioning of the Justice League, sooner or later they were going to know the inconsistencies of his explanation. And Batman, MR PARANOIA, you know what I mean, the truth was going to come out later. So better the truth came from him earlier to earn some brownie points with bats. Even, if arguing he came out of the questioning successfully with the Justice League, he needed to practice his mind defense with a psychic like Martian Manhunter. So you get the drift. But I think it was intentional on the part of the author to put the Mc in that situation, he could have landed the Mc in a secluded place.
But still they will never imagined themselves being a comic characters right? Even if the mc knows what happen because of having read comics they will never come Up with explanation that maybe he is from a world with Them being only a comIc characters cause that would absurd even For batman, so no Letting them know that they are comic characters Is like taking away the uniqueness of mc, And also his advantage and letting them know that he has a system is one of The hatest thing in fanfiction. Why does it matters if batman is paranoid? The mc has a system Which makes him Powerful and Mc with knowing all Of them knows their weakNess but now It Is Shared by others so yes he lost the advantage.
The author should add that the aMbassador of god Cannot be influence with any related with mind cause if the mc is easily being Mind read then he Will be Easily mind control so yeah I think if i were the gods who made him aMbassador i would never make mc be Easily taken control or being mind read cause he is important.
This I agree. Many comic characters have not taken being in a comic book well, it has driven most of them to madness. Still some versions of dc heroes have knowledge about them being comic characters and existence of our earth in their multiverse, where dc comics exist. Still them knowing about his future knowledge takes away the SI feel. Since then it just becomes a normal dc fanfic where they have a character who time travelled or can see future.