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simplevoid
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2022-05-16 10:36

It is really confusing to tell who is talking during character interaction. Making it hard to get into the story having multiple characters talking at once with indicating who is talking takes away from the story.

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Saintbarbido
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I'll fix that

KeiJu
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ngl I've never had that problem

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