webnovel
Luffy_For_The_Win
Luffy_For_The_WinLv42yr
2022-11-17 04:03

To start my review, I will say I like the plot of the story and what is happening. However there are so many grammar issues that it is a crime not to have an editor. Every paragraph has either a changed pronoun for the characters or is flipping between 1st, 2nd, and 3rd person. It is hard to even know if some side characters are men or women. Then there is the occasional wrong word for what the situation is. Then there are the skills. One reader gave comments that show how the skill names are wrong and should be changed. Then there is a portion where the mc combines skills. However the author deigned to skip the combination part of the story. So us readers are left wondering what skills combined into what. The author basically needs to edit the chapter or get an editor. Good story though.

A journey through the universes

Jasmer
4.2
198 Chs

Liked it!

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Melshan
MelshanLv7

Add ALL women to the harรฉm hehehe....... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

2yr

TFH
TFHLv6

this is a translation. pls add the site where we can find the raws. plus mentioning who the author is and that you are translating it. otherwise. youbare stealing the authors work

2yr
Dr200
Dr200Lv10

The name is journey through the universe but he doesnโ€™t leave the world heโ€™s in so you should change the name

2yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

The story is not bad in itself, the problem is that the author (or translator) changes the names of the characters. For example: Kohta is called Cat, Rei is Ray.... There are also very embarrassing parts of the story, it's exactly Mc in the way he acts and talks with other characters, he looks like a beta SIMp with OP skills.

2yr
Ballad
BalladLv5

The Story in itself isn't bad, The Problem is the horrible grammar it just kills it I read up to Epilogue Chapter and it was hard. It's your typical Wish Fulfillment Fic so there's that.

2yr
MifCore
MifCoreLv1

Hello dear readers, as a person who follows the work of Vito, the author of a journey through the universes, I want to upset you a little by the fact that the works are stopped at chapter 60, 4 volumes, One Piece of arches, due to the fact that the author is seriously ill and cannot continue writing, there is no continuation since August 20, so please I'm sorry if I ruined your mood, have a nice day, don't get sick. :)

2yr
metanik_estrain
metanik_estrainLv1

This novel is from a russian author, and the free Chapters are a lot much. The question is if you are the original whos posted here ir another one who is domingo it

2yr
Jorge_Luis_5341
Jorge_Luis_5341Lv4

keep translating this is very good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
TFH
TFHLv6

Well... The story is not bad, its just to bad the author wont read this review... Now about the translation? its just a bit better than google translator, so this means its BAD but not terrible. Names of the characters are often mistranslated, not to mention genders such as mistaken Him with her and his with her etc. And a lot of other mistakes. Can it be read and understood? yes.

2yr
Bofa99
Bofa99Lv5

๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

2yr
Related Stories

One Piece: Starting by Refusing Shanks

Takumi finds himself unexpectedly transported to the world of One Piece, where he activates the Traveler Sign-In System. This unique system allows him to receive powerful rewards by completing sign-in tasks at specific locations throughout the world. In his first sign-in, he gains mastery over all three types of Haki. At Windmill Village, he acquires the powerful Fire Style: Great Dragon Fire Technique. In Frost Moon Village, he receives the legendary Demon Sword, Star Fragment. At the Baratie, the Sea Restaurant, he masters Shunpo (Flash Step) and the devastating Night Guy technique. As Takumi continues his journey, he signs in at iconic locations like Loguetown, Drum Island, Alabasta, Skypiea, Enies Lobby, Sabaody Archipelago, and Impel Down, gaining more incredible abilities along the way. Red-Haired Shanks: "Rejected twice... This guy really knows how to ignore me." Garp: "Even if we can't be comrades, we can still be friends, right, Takumi?" *********************************************************** The image used is not mine; if you are the owner and would like it removed, please let me know This novel is a translation of the original work "ๆตท่ดผ๏ผšไปŽๆ‹’็ป็บขๅ‘้‚€่ฏทๅผ€ๅง‹" by ๅ†ฅๅนฝไนๆญŒ.

Gered ยท Anime & Comics
4.1
308 Chs

Douluo : People are writing diaries in Douluo

Su Ming dies unexpectedly and is reborn in the world of Douluo Dalu with a powerful ability called "Ultimate Wood" and a unique diary-writing system. This system grants him rewards every day he writes in his diary, including potent techniques like a Douluo version of Wood Style and even the Sharingan eye technique. Su Ming is determined to reach the pinnacle of the Douluo world using these rewards. However, he soon realizes that familiar characters like Xiao Wu, Zhu Zhuqing, and Hu Liena are not who he expected. Notes- this is a translated fanfic, there might be short mistakes bear with me, it is a very good read, people who don't like it is probably because their taste is different as everyone is unique anyway enjoy everyone..., original title : People are writing diaries in Douluo, something is wrong with them ไบบๅœจๆ–—็ฝ—ๅ†™ๆ—ฅ่ฎฐ๏ผŒๅฅนไปฌไธๅฏนๅŠฒ Read advanced chapters in my patreon, link in comments

Shadow_D_X ยท Anime & Comics
4.5
275 Chs

Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!

Rob was a high-level hacker and wanted by many government organizations because he leaked the secrets of many countries. So he didn't dare to come out of his hiding much. Since he was alone, he lived a difficult life, which that he found the joy and the excitement of life in only two things: The rule of the Internet, and the anime world. One day he came across an interesting advertisement on his personal computer that turned his life upside down. [Ding!] [The art publishing system is being prepared...] [The system is ready!] From that time onwards his goal became to draw One Piece manga in the pirates' world! And make the great era of pirates even more chaotic! ยถยถยถยถยถ Author: BlackStar_BH (Me) ยถยถยถยถยถ Note: Needless to say, this book has the same idea as "Creating The Manga Of Naruto On Naruto World Become My Ultimate Goal!" But here it applies to the world of One Piece, I was inspired by the idea and I wanted to apply it to the world of One Piece, and I hope it succeeds, of course, there will be a conspiracy and I will make sure to improve the story according to the readers opinions. ยถยถยถยถยถ As for publishing chapters, it would depend entirely on the interaction the story receives, whether it is 4 chapters a day or 2 chapters or 1 chapter or 0 chapters... It all depends on the readers' enthusiasm for this interesting book. ยถยถยถยถยถ I don't own One Piece nor do I own its characters, all I own is the protagonist, after all, this is just a fanfic without any profit, just for fun. I don't own Bleach, Attack on titan, Hunter X Hunter, Naruto, and I don't own their characters. ยถยถยถยถยถ EXTRA TAGS: #ATTACKONTITAN #HUNTERXHUNTER ยถยถยถยถยถ My Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/BlackStar_BH (+30 Chapters ahead Webnovel.) My Ko-fi: (New) https://ko-fi.com/blackstar_bh (+30 Chapters ahead Webnovel.)

BlackStar_BH ยท Anime & Comics
4.7
828 Chs

MTS: Marvel and Beyond

Title: Multiversal Template System Alex was transmigrated to the body of a newly awakened mutant. The original owner of the body was also named Alex, Alex Locke, an ordinary college student. About a month ago, he suddenly awakened to a mutant ability and used it to escape unscathed from a burning building. Although he survived the disaster, there was no subsequent good fortune. A few days later, his parents discovered his mutant ability and, despising it, kicked him out of the house. He was then pursued by a mysterious organization and was accidentally abducted by gang members from Hell's Kitchen, ending up in this unknown underground prison. As for his mutant ability, it was a weak version of Sebastian Shaw's ability, which was the reason for him being captured. Just as Alex was despairing about how he will die just after transmigrating, a voice sounded in his ear. [ Congratulations, you have awakened the 'Multiversal Character Template System'! ] [ You have obtained the character template: Gojo Satoru! ] [ You have awakened the skill 'Six Eyes' lv1 ] "Oh..." A few hours later [ Template Fusion Rate: 5% ] [ New Skill Unlocked: Limitless Technique ] ===== Link: Pรฅtreon.com/BaphometFiction I post 10 advanced chapters of this fanfic there. ===== I literally don't own anything here, all rights goes to their respective owners.

Baph0met ยท Anime & Comics
4.1
128 Chs

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group

10 chapters / week This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, business, events and incidents are the products of the author's imagination. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. --- He had been reincarnated, he thought that he didn't cheat until suddenly he noticed someone invite him on a group chat. [Do you wish to join Dimensional Chat Group?] MC: "Accept!" --------------------------------------------- Cover not mine, it's from anime Yosuga no Sora --------------------------------------------- Grammar sometimes sucks but bear with it. https://discord.gg/Q3MFzds If you want to tell me there is a grammar mistake. --------------------------------------------- https://www.patreon.com/akikan40 Maybe I'll be full of energy to write your favorite fanfic.

akikan40 ยท Anime & Comics
4.6
2206 Chs
Login