Review Detail of Doublenile in Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer

overall it was decent. had a solid start with only a few minor cringe moments that where fine. unfortunatly at chapter 49 it changed. from the start it was quite a similar feeling to "The beginning after the end", but at chapter 49 it just straight copied with the only difference being the method of seperation from his parents. (btw copied losely, like it wasnt word for word but it was the near exact same situation and annoying cliche shit). I know authors like to add conflict and need to do it for the plot, but you actually dont. adding a forced section just for "plot" is dumb, 1 its cliche and personally pisses me off, but 2 if it went down the more pieceful route of actually completing the journey "plot" can still happen. Conflicts at the city, training against stronger and better people, etc. Writing quality was decent, a few mistakes and oddly worded sentences but nothing that majorly affected anything. Characters where decent, had a few laughs as well as a few cringe moments but not bad ones. Dynamic between parents was sometimes odd but overall they where better than the mc himself. World is good, explains the systems decently well and is intresting. The mc is fine, but not to my tastes massively. To me it was very unatural and weird that the moment he reincarnated he cried at having parents. like at least wait a few years for feelings to develop. He was also a little weird with his logic, like he would train to get stronger seemingly having novel knowledge but then gives himself a bunch of obvious red flags. he was also a little too childish for me, now i dont mind them having fun but he was too into the child roll for someone with his mental age. The only major problem i have with the story was the chapter 49 part. it ruined it, was unoriginal and boring, and personally would have much rather seen him be with his family and learning stuff their than useless and plot armour driven forced combat.