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It's a bad novel. MC is in constant suffer. Even if he gets stronger, this 'growing' doesn't mean much as he continues to suffer and is dragged into situations he doesn't understand. The author forcefully throws the MC into the plot before introducing a plot twist and we start to understand the events while he soothes his masochism. Although he is initially portrayed as a determined and decisive person, Mc often becomes an idiot in order to advance the plot. His decisions and behavior make him look like a child. And I don't understand why he's always complaining and yelling about something. He's always angry, resentful or complaining about something, even though he's been through so much and even the author refers to him as someone with a calm mind. Doesn't anyone see the contradiction here? This book is not very good both in writing and literary terms. He wants to be immortal, but seriously, the desire behind it is ridiculous. Most people want it, he's no different, but the author makes it so cringe when he writes it... I'll kill millions, I'll destroy the world, and... and yeah after that I'll be immortal. Couldn't you be a little more specific? The logic behind your wishes and thoughts is so flat. He doesn't even feel like a human being to me. He's just a robot programmed with the goal of immortality. Honestly, I lasted 20 chapters. I don't know what it would really be like if this novel has a romance and a harem, but I'm sure it would be pretty bad. He's a ruthless psychopath, ready to sacrifice everything. To turn this man into a dog crawling after a woman...

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Rise To The Zenith

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I'm not going to lie, I was new to writing so the first volume and some, around chapter 60 is hard to read and probably even cringe for some. But I at least think it gets better after those 60 chapters... Also, since the more people die, the more death energy there is, by the extinction of the humans in one sweep, after the massive influx of death energy, there'll be an endless supply of life energy, hence the reasoning behind his desiring to kill everyone... well at that point in the book...