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2023-03-21 08:08

Hope you come back and continue to write because man u did a really good job with what little I could read here. You improved and started to improve on a lot that was faulty with the Netflix show e.g. the characters some world background depth. The main character you create is honestly surprisingly good and character dialogue is also great. the potential of what u were undertaking here honestly leaves me wanting more. U have great writing skill and I hope u return to pick this back up

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