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TinyBookDragon
TinyBookDragonLv43yr
2022-04-25 05:14

Dialogue isn't great and the interactions between characters are even worse. Every interaction feels weird and the conversation is stilted. Basic grammar is generally fine though there are a few mistakes here and there. I've set this aside as something to skim through when I run out of other things to read.

Magical Odyssey in Marvel

OrangePanther
4.4
35 Chs

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OrangePanther
OrangePantherAuthor

Shameless self review, because I'm shameless like that. In a seriousness, though, I hope you like this fanfic. I have alot planned for this.

3yr

Mirio_kun
Mirio_kunLv1

I hope he will go to Kamar taj too. Those magic will also making it much easier for him to live and not just survive. The fic is good. Hope you will continue to update like the usual.

3yr
April_04
April_04Lv3

Author i m ready to transmigrate in this marvel - harry potter combo world Universe take me..... .

3yr
End0
End0Lv10

unoriginal,.................,.................,.................,.................,.................,.................,.................,.................

3yr
ArslanII
ArslanIILv2

Great HP fic, has potential. I'm too sleepy to say more, deal with it.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

3yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Story development: 2 star Character desing: 2 star World background: 0 star The story is super slow, to the point of becoming boring. Nothing interesting happens and the interactions with the other characters are bland and/or silly. The first chapter was a good start...

2yr
naraiz_ryhall
naraiz_ryhallLv3

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

3yr
trudny1
trudny1Lv4

Story and ideas show great promise for future, main downsides is poorly written/lack of character interactions. It might improve later as I'm writing it after chapter 9 and MC didn't go to Hogwarts yet.

3yr
Lazy_sensei8
Lazy_sensei8Lv15

Is this officially dropped?

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