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dndeath
dndeathLv141yr
2023-06-26 18:40

the dynamic between him and the demoness / anyone else stronger then him is extremely repetetive and anoying. mc is always under someones control bending the knee, acting like a servant. author is refraining from mentioning the cultivation level of these people, presumably so that he can keep this going forever. the sequence of events feels forced. Everyone is looking for trouble with mc for no real reason (it is unclear to me why he is the center of attention at all), and to top it of he is horrible at using his cheat...

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dndeath
dndeathLv14

additionally, the title is bs. nothing he does is a secret from the demoness. she sees through everything, including system given divine abilities.

Alex_7892
Alex_7892Lv15

Agreed novel is trash.

dndeath
dndeathLv14

I read a few more chapters before I dropped it. Who searches for a system/cheat novel, and is then happy with reading about an mc being a slave and constantly getting abused.

Alex_7892:Agreed novel is trash.
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