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antmanFNLv132yr
2022-07-20 13:50

I love stories like these where aauthor or a gamer comes to the world of the novel or gamed they played but this novel just gives me heavy overlord vibes but if the characters switched bodies like if ains and touch me both went to the new world but switched bodies and one became a warrior instead of a magician and so forth but what I really hate and don't like is the lack of motivation from the mc like he dosent pursue getting stronger at all he hasn't done 1 thing in all the 50 chapters I've read he literally gets 1 random power boost that comes with a penalty and that's it like why isn't he abusing farming methods from the game or going out looking for good items I think 50 chapters in should be enough time for him to do atleast 3 of these things but he only got 1 sword and he dosnet even use it🤦🏿‍♂️

Reborn As The Villain

Immortal_17
3.8
317 Chs

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DaoistOmwXlw
DaoistOmwXlwLv3

Attention! My dear friends, mc is a cuck, beta and loser. Read on your own risk.

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Aayann_
Aayann_Lv14

I really don't know why author make mc gave everything to the protagonist. I don't know if you want mc to throw all heroines to protagonist and want to give all opportunity to make him grow then your are the dumbess person in the world.

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TheOnlyTrueOne
TheOnlyTrueOneLv4

So far loving everything. Especially our MC not being stupid and immediately going for the new personality, thing. Writing Quality: So far so good, I haven't seen any particular big grammatical errors Stability of Updates: A regular update of once every second day. Which is an easy perfect score. Story Development: Haven't really read enough to say much about it but I like the build up for upcoming events and such. Character Design: Best part of the story. World Background: I have already gotten a great input of multiple different things but not a lot politically, wich is a big thing for me. So yeah, loving this so far and recommending it to anyone who loves intelligent and scheming protagonists.

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ali_jedli
ali_jedliLv3

honestly the story is good and the writer is quiet talented too , but there were a some plot holes such as when the mc left to adventure he was undercover and only the guild master recognised him , and then left to slay the dragon , meanwhile Lancelot found his aura at the crime scene ( idk man black tech , helps you know the owner of the aura , how it works ? not explained ) and somehow and with no further lead he kind of went where the mc is ,how he knew his location ? not explained , saw him fighting the dragon , used a spell (he's a swordman who can use mana and divinity ,which is unbalanced) that teleports the enemy against his will from miles away , how it works ? not explained then he made a barrier that made him invincible , how it works ? not explained if you read the above you'll get my first point : only a little is explained. my second point is how inconsistent the story is , for example lancelot crossed the distance between 2 nations in a day and a half max , while in the 'castle attack' arc the duchess didn't call the Duke to come because it'll take a week ? ,i mean the distance was 20 kilometers and he was far more powerful than Lancelot so shouldn't he cross it in an 2 hours max ?

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D_e_a_t_h
D_e_a_t_hLv13

i enjoyed this book, although i am waoting for the character to grow a bit more and not be pushed arouns as much. hope the updates come fast ;)

2yr
DaoistGrandFate
DaoistGrandFateLv13

Author was daydreaming when writing this thing called novel and wrote whatever he found interesting

1yr
Cecar_Nim
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HazeUniverse_1
HazeUniverse_1Lv2

keep it up I am supporting with power stones love it I will give a proper review after you have completed 20 chapters give explanation of powers

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Poisoncheaker
PoisoncheakerLv13

This is not my cup of tea. After reading the first 20 chapters I stopped. Especially from the readers' prospect of view, I don't like the decision Mc made, such as Mc's Lapdog and the thought process along with it.

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