honestly the story is good and the writer is quiet talented too , but there were a some plot holes such as when the mc left to adventure he was undercover and only the guild master recognised him , and then left to slay the dragon , meanwhile Lancelot found his aura at the crime scene ( idk man black tech , helps you know the owner of the aura , how it works ? not explained ) and somehow and with no further lead he kind of went where the mc is ,how he knew his location ? not explained , saw him fighting the dragon , used a spell (he's a swordman who can use mana and divinity ,which is unbalanced) that teleports the enemy against his will from miles away , how it works ? not explained then he made a barrier that made him invincible , how it works ? not explained if you read the above you'll get my first point : only a little is explained. my second point is how inconsistent the story is , for example lancelot crossed the distance between 2 nations in a day and a half max , while in the 'castle attack' arc the duchess didn't call the Duke to come because it'll take a week ? ,i mean the distance was 20 kilometers and he was far more powerful than Lancelot so shouldn't he cross it in an 2 hours max ?
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LIKEalmost forgot , until chapter 57 the mc fought against gangsters , monsters , a dragon ,an op heretical inquisitor , almost got assasinated , and also fought knights and imps while his family was fighting were other powerful gangsters , well this is honestly very great for the story but the thing is ... all of this happens in 1 WEEK . a disaster after disaster after disaster is a very heavy pace , there should be more allocated time towards other stuff like the world background , how does a normal person get his class, since birth ? or by doing specific actions ? what are the benefits of class ? in the story stats are the mesure not the level , so how do you raise your stats ? or rather how would this veteran player increase his stats ? what's the difference between the spells of mages and priests ? how can a person whether he has the potential to be a mage or not ? i'm expecting a buffer time for those things and cutting the snowball effect
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oh I get it now.. It is the type of story where mc conquer whole universe in few months while fighting thosands of battle. yeah its the type pf story that I hate most as things went too fast for mc. and author just keep introducing trouble after trouble for mc.. even of world were very less advance in technology somehow mc conqure universe in few months and thats too from scratch (some chonese story that I read before).
ali_jedli:almost forgot , until chapter 57 the mc fought against gangsters , monsters , a dragon ,an op heretical inquisitor , almost got assasinated , and also fought knights and imps while his family was fighting were other powerful gangsters , well this is honestly very great for the story but the thing is ... all of this happens in 1 WEEK . a disaster after disaster after disaster is a very heavy pace , there should be more allocated time towards other stuff like the world background , how does a normal person get his class, since birth ? or by doing specific actions ? what are the benefits of class ? in the story stats are the mesure not the level , so how do you raise your stats ? or rather how would this veteran player increase his stats ? what's the difference between the spells of mages and priests ? how can a person whether he has the potential to be a mage or not ? i'm expecting a buffer time for those things and cutting the snowball effect
